This is definitely going in my favorites list. Love this! =]

LOL this is totally AWESOME! brilliantly written! you have written the characters perfectly! it could pass as an actual scene!

and the stroy! i love it! to be quite honest, i can only describle this stroy as KICKASS!

please write a sequal to this (perhaps a romantic one?)!

God, I'm going to end up accidentally saying things from this story. Especially "Spontainiously combust with shame." I love that. Great work yet again.

I find myself coming back to this story again and again, always late at night, and every time I click the 'review' button, and then leave again because no-one needs me to tell them this is an excellent work and anything I offer would basically read as, "This good. You write more?"

So that alone will have to stand in as my accolade -- that although I cannot find the words for the gratification of seeing the characters captured and contrasted so, so well, or the delight of their guarded, sweet confusion, or the deeper thrill of the breathless, elliptic stream-of-consciousness moments -- I come back to read it night after night, and it never grows stale.

This good. You write more?

absolutely adored it

I love the little glimpses into Yuffie's thoughts, and the interaction between the two.
Great story!

I'm surprised you only have 12 reviews for this one (13 now including mine) - very well written and I think you got the two characters down to the T. Quite disappointed that nothing romantic happened in the end... Here's to hoping for a romantic (but realistic) sequel. You're awesome.

That was hilarious!

I loved this. Very nicely done. I think that's very much Yuffie and very much Vinnie.

Great job!!

That was .. so Yuffie. Lawl. Well written. You did good. I found myself reading it fast and hyperactively.

Looking into Yuffie's mind gives me a headache...but you pulled it off magnificently!

Vincent + Yuffie + beach = OT3. This had me grinning almost from the start =) Awesome job.

I'm sad you only got six reviews for this as it is an absolute adorable fanfic. I wonder if something could come out of it, a sequel or something, but that's a little difficult with one-shots like these, isn't it?
Very well-written and very few typos. I really enjoyed it.

You wrote a Yuffentine!! Huehehehe. Forgive me for pointing out the obvious, but hey, I knew you from the Naruto fandom and when I received the little alert email thingy saying that you wrote an FF7 story, I was ecstatic (haven't read any FF7 stuff in a while).

Uhh, yeah. Story. This was so much fun. I absolutely love your runny sentences. It's so Yuffie. Hehe. Everything from 'She’s a kickass ninja, after all; who wouldn’t want to grope her nonexistent boobs?' to Rude-like sunglasses to her bullying those two kids. And you say Yuffie is a sucky role model. I beg to differ. She's my hero. XD

And Vinnie. He's passive and broody-like and hard to read in that way of his, and the way you write him is so damn good. '"Spontaneous,” he replies quietly, “is to occur, by definition, without external cause, Yuffie."' That just cracked me up. How very Vinnie. The way Yuffie reads him too, that little thing with the bandanna slightly wrinkling and whatnot. So, so adorable. (And I agree, he has pretty hair and ugly shoes)

AND, must not forget the brackets and italics of course. 'what of us and not-us, and what are we outside of that? what is the ‘us’ apart, the all of nothing?' I love this line. It confuses me to no end (my mind is still running around in circles), but, in Yuffie's words, it's 'kickass'. In any case, it made me think. =)

SO. Thank you for writing this lovable little thing. Do write more. I'd love to read something of yours that 'makes sense'. XD

This has really - really, and I'm not kidding here, broken my brain. Several times in a row. I swear.

Other than that? LOVE. Pure and simple love for you and your words. Once again. Wah. Vinnie's thoughts just spilling in the middle of all the craziness that is Yuffie - "and what of us?" - broke me so much more than anything else.

Salad days made me giggle. As did the "swoosh" imitation. And practicaly everything else. But! Brain still broken. I might just need to read this again. Still - LOVE.

Marry me? You know, well - BECAUSE, we could buy new glasses, steal buckets and shovels and make castles of our own. *grins* Or just write something again.