OMG! That was...awsome. Please continue, I'd like to see what happens next.

It's really good so far. Please continue

Oh. So sad. Yet cute. Thats gonna hurt his pride later if Emmett teases him about it, but he better not or i will rip out all Rosalie's hair and blame him! Mwahaha!

wow! i realy wanted you to keep going. i like it. THAT is how ?New Moon should've gone. hehe. excellent.

wow of all the ways i've thought about how i would've had bella act in that part of the story this idea never came to mind i love it. it is so good!

oh no...the last line...time will tell? does that mean they're gonna split up? no...please write more!

Three simple words. I heart it.

Omg omg omg omg omg! This made me squeal one of those high pitched squeals that you only do when something excites you so much..or whatever! xD I haven't squealed like that in a long time! No other fanfiction has made me do that in a long time!! -squeals and giggles almost starting to cry she's so excited-

It was cute... The first chapter was great, though the second was quite strained, I don't think Edward would have reacted that way...

oh my god!
this was spectacular.
when edward was saying how much he loved bella, and was explaining to his family what had happened in the forest, i actually cried!
i loved it!
it was nothing short of amazing.
you deffinitely should continue with itt
please. :)

I loved it!

8 purple balloons and 4 cookies!

I loved it!
please write more! :D

AW! *crys*

This was great... I loved it... Great writing...

JENNIFER

I love this! I can't wait for more chapters!