Haha. How sweet and cute. And funny at the same time, too. The fact you used Garbage's 'You Look So Fine', made my day that much better. The dialogue was very cute and realistic between them - I could imagine them saying the things they said.

' “Well, where do I stand with you?”

“On the fucking ground! I love you! I love the way you are, the way we are. Why

change it? Nothing is going to change my love for you. To me, you’re perfect.” '

Had to have been my favourite part. Just knowing he stood on the ground - was enough for me.

If I had one constructive criticism though, it'd have to be... you need to fix the formatting. Tweak the paragraphs and all that other good stuff - just use Quickedit instead of html. Makes things easier in this case it seems. If you did so, it'd add to the story.

Coz, right now. It's taking away from it.

But. I still like this.

Be good, do good, and keep doing that good thing you do.

Cheers,

Your Friendly Neighbourhood Bisexual.

Look, it's a dead body... !

It's a girl...

Let's poke her boobs!

Morbid, am I not?

OOH! That was good. _ I loved it! Especially: "I have this overwhelming urge to hit you with something blunt and heavy." and "Oh that’s a great idea that is. ‘Dear Sir/Madam…you are cordially invited to

the wedding of the Angel of Death and the Watcher.’ I think not." Haha! Too good. _

NIce...all I can say is that I liked it. I liked it very mch.

Its an interesting story but the way you have it set up makes it kind of hard to read.

absolutly amazing, romantic, funny,

quirky and cool. Email me!

Aww. One word: Adorable!

ok that was weird good but weird

Awww! Very cute indeed. I just love the two of them together, they make such a sweet couple.

Hehe, cute. Very cute. Sorry to be repetitive, but this was simply darling! *sighs* I am so glad I found this section. I thought I was the only one that had considered Bartleby/Loki. LOL, most of the stuff in here is that stuff. Great fic.

hehehe, cheesy, but in a good way.

Hehe. That was kinda cute. Could be fleshed out a bit more...but it's a songfic, so it's not exactly necessary. Nice emotion. Doncha just love this pairing? There's so many little quirks inherant in it. _ !Jemariel