One of the most descriptive pieces I have ever read.
The way you were able to capture the character's emotions like they were your own is a true skill, and you should pride yourself apon it.
The insight to people's minds, while not being in their person, takes a lot of hard work, and many people can't do it...or can't do it well. You, however, captured that ability with finesse.

However, despite the fact that there were more pros then cons to your writing methods in this story, more dialogue is duly appreciated, and captures teh reader's attention more. (some people have A.D.D. real bad. XD) but other then that slight suggestion, the story was fantastic. 4 1/2 * XD ^^

Great Beginning to the story! So Masaki is still alive? I wonder if Ichigo will snap... Great job on making Isshin in character! He is a hard person to keep in character and still be funny and serious in one shot! Cant wait for another chapter!

I knew about this story from what you post in my fourm ^^ ... I don' t know why didn't you get alot of review ?? after all this story is really great

KRS~!

Sounds good so far. I'm new to this whole Bleach thing (only caught up to episode 48 in English, 54 in Japanese) so I can't say that I'm solely aware of everything that's going on.

One part that really sticks out though --

[ "Ah, dear Masaki, I couldn't have done it without you." Isshin spoke into the darkness.

"Here's to your son." Isshin took his sakezaki and toasted it with the air. ]

That's a fine line you wrote there. Short and simple, yet powerful. It's nice to see Ichigo's father in his rare 'fatherly' moments.

love it ♥

Good job! I really like this show, and you definitely served this justice.

yes, i have an account here :)

Your friends were right, according 2 wat u said in the forum. it is interestingly written, and i definetely want 2 kno y her death was staged. it could be longer to go more into the story line (even i have trouble with that), but otherwise, im looking forward 2 it!

PS cau u read my bleach fic and tell me wat u think? though i havent updated in forever (internet not working, writers block, vacation)

Very good.
Very good indeed.