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| Shandrial 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseHeh, I though Hannibal was going to rip Face a new one for something, what a surprise at the end! Wnderfully done and well written! Heh, now I'm curious as to what happened... |
| Zarz 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really good piece. I love the interactions between the characters, as well as not being sure who messed up doing what. Face's reactions were really believable, and the ending was great. There were definitely a couple of times on the show that Hannibal could have used a little reminding about not letting one's ego get in the way. I will mention your ratings seem to be a little bit confused. At the beginning of the chapter, you say it's NC-17, i.e. worse than R, no one 17 and under can read, and technically banned on this site. The rating you've put in the header is K+, so for older kids, about PG. Honestly, I'd put the story about half-way in between, perhaps T for teen (~PG 13). There's some swearing, but it could be worse. I also noticed the discrepancy on another of your stories, so I hope this clears that up. |
| shadowwalker213 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseWell, you could cut back a little bit on the first part (went just a might overboard describing BA and Murdock) but... I LOVED that ending! |
| L Zaza 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. You had me fooled, and I "ain't no fool!". ;) I was truly dying to know what the heck Face had done wrong, but when it turned out that I had it wrong, it honestly didn't seem to matter anymore. I guess I was too busy being impressed that you put one over on me. Great job! |