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| Udyjay 2008-01-25 ch 3,  | abuseKjnkjBkjhKJBjkhKJBkjbhKJBNjnkfiojsdakml! WHOA! Oh mah gawd, what just happened?! ;A; No way! God, that... you.. I.. just... GLJSKDMFADSKLMF. Omg. You must update! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. |
| Fangirl-16 2007-11-03 ch 3, | abuseOH poor Larsa! :'( I love the story! Please update soon please! |
| AGENT UBER 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseSorry, I steer clear of Yoai. Nabaios. |
| jemkin 2007-10-07 ch 3, anon. | abusei like the story and by the way there is something that you can prove on in this story and your not doing it. That is to continue the damn story, which is gret. continue pls. am i late for this. |
| skeptical 2007-09-29 ch 3, anon. | abusei have read alot of final fantasy fics but i think this was the best one. keep it up. |
| skeptical 2007-09-29 ch 3, anon. | abusei have read alot of final fantasy fics but i think this was the best one. keep it up. |
| hwoarang 2007-09-29 ch 3, anon. | abusehey, that chaper wasnt bad. ithink it was your best one in this story and maybe the next chapters would be the same. |
| kelly 2007-09-28 ch 3, anon. | abusethe story was, verry well written. hey will u pls continue. |
| Tomiko90 2007-08-26 ch 3, | abuseWhy do you hate it??!?! I want more!! |
| Balthier's Eternal Lover 2007-08-22 ch 3, | abuseD: But I love it. There's nothing that needs improvement. T^T I want more |
| LonelyRollingStar 2007-08-19 ch 3, | abuseOmg o.o This...is such a cute fanfiction. Larsa and Gabranth are amazing! x_x I absolutely adore when Gabranth says "my lo...Larsa...", making it sound like "my Larsa". OMG, that is bar-none one of the cutest mistakes I've ever seen. I definitely understand Gabranth's worries...but a solution must be found! *cries* And by the way, this is really well written, and none of the characters seem out-of-character at all to me...I don't see much to criticize upon, so keep up the good work! |
| timespanned soul 2007-08-18 ch 3, | abuseWow T_T I so love this story... Gabranth/Larsa is a pairing I have never really thought about before, but your fanfiction has me hooked... I can understand Noahs doubts, and also Larsas hurt. I hope they will speak to each other again soon... |
| RETURN OF THE GREAT MOCHILO... 2007-08-16 ch 3, | abuseI'm amazed! I love this fic, and I think you've kept the characters true to their stature - I've no critisism to offer, it's pretty well written. PLEASE update soon! |
| Archadian 2007-08-14 ch 3, | abuseUh-oh... Anyway...Just freaking kiss that hunk Gabranth! |
| Disbanded Matrimony 2007-08-13 ch 3, | abuse0.0 squee!! I love this fic! I, truthfully, don't think you need to improve anything. :D You know I started the first GabranthxLarsa, BaschxLarsa C2? Yeah... I went through the whole fandom, and found like, five or six fics. :/ Isn't that sad? Heh. We need more!! Anyways, please update soon. ^^ |