); nu

*croaks* My God, that was fantastic. I am quite literally speechless.

THAT'S SO SAD, I THINK I'M GONNA CRY! T.T

M, slash :)
Nice twist at the end too, I enjoyed reading this!!

Emma x

This was really sad but well written. I feel bad for Jack. He'll never see the real Ralph again...

What happened to Ralph, though? I know he died, but was it in a car accident?

best. Ralph x Jack fic. EVER.
I actually cried at the end.
beautiful writing, characterization, plot, everything is perfect. great job!

Wow. I am blown away. I usually try to give a tiny bit of critique in a review, but I can honestly saw that i saw not a single thing that could be improved. It flowed so beautifully, and the way you wrote their emotions was really perfect. That ending had me so close to tears! I love your take on how Ralph and Jack's relationship could have gone after the book. I love this fic!

Oh.. That's such a sad ending. Great though. I loved it. =)

WOW. I am...completely winded. That had to be one of the most haunting, depressing endings EVER.

I had this bad feeling the paragraph where Ralph was driving home...*Bows to your phenomenal writing skills*

Oh, Sakai, this is wonderful. I always thought that something should have happened between Jack and Ralph, and here you've presented me with it in a very original setting. It's so sad, yet so satisfactory at the same time. Bravo, once again. Yay.
--Phaith

I loved this it was very cute and sad, it does sound like Ralph could have gotten into an accident, and then when the nurse tries to tell jack, Jacks all like "Nuh uh! He's right here!" and stuff...but being stranded on n island does that to people...I assume...

Awesome story

OMG
I thought that that was the saddest thing I've ever read in a while.
Oh god. Poor baby. I don't even know what to say, I thought my stomach just dissapeared from my body when I read that.
But FANTASTIC writing as always!

...kya...you captured jack's unbalanced state well, and ralph is also in character --> good job! the only thing that maybe you could improve on is clarifying on what happened to ralph -- it's more poignant if the reader understands fully, then reads about jack. on the whole, great fic!!

SADNESS! Aww...It was amazingly written, and super cute. I feel soo bad for Jack now. Love love loved it!

-A. Con

D: Why'd you kill 'im? ;^;