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ZelinkInuKag
2008-09-16
ch 1,
abuseO..M..G...KAWAI! SUPER CUTE! {squeals] the sweetest thing! super great job!
PurpleStar929
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseGood Story
NightStar28
2008-02-05
ch 1,
abuseHot, hot, very hot... Wow, just hot.
Silverbug2012
2008-01-30
ch 1,
abuseI love your work!! I hope you come out with a great story!!
KataangNutyBabe
2007-11-25
ch 1,
abuseSexy **! A very good M-rated fic.
Rusty spencer
2007-09-29
ch 1, anon.
abusehehehe i like it
Hanyou Yogonem
2007-08-26
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was great! Love it! Make more!
Gbaby808
2007-08-22
ch 1,
abuseWOW this was one of the best lemons I've never read like really it was good.
Sasuke's Lover14
2007-08-10
ch 1,
abuseGreat story. You should make more like them! Ja mata ne! (See you later!)
The Snickerdoodle Alchemist
2007-08-08
ch 1,
abuseomg, i love it!
Curse And Hex
2007-07-16
ch 1,
abusehex speaking - ... THAT WAS AWESOME! I TOTALLY LOVE THAT PAIRING but now i've got to get off of the internet to WATCH the show ...
meluvpirates
2007-07-11
ch 1,
abusewhats a lemon?
Crystal Tornado
2007-07-10
ch 1,
abuseThat was both sweet and steamy! Good job of not making it overly mushy or overly lusty. Well done!
flying.to.fantasy.
2007-07-08
ch 1,
abuseintelligent plot. absolutely juicy. love the demon coming out to play and mate.. very HOT. what better word to describe it than that. :)
peya luna
2007-07-08
ch 1, anon.
abusegreat! i really like his shyness and total lack of experience. i mean honestly, can anyone imagine him and kikio doin it 50 years ago?! that b*tch would have never touched him befor he turned human!
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