A great story. Very good.

Goodness gracious!

You really ARE good, aren't you...

Tell you what: I'll proceed to read one more story of yours and if I like it as much as I like this and "His Little Wife", I'll give you my email address. Even if you find it ten years later, feel free to drop me a note!

*sighs* A great story, I liked it a lot. Especially since it wasn't slash.
But your note at the end got me thinking in that direction. I still prefer to think of it as non-slash. That's so rare nowadays.

wow, girlie.

...“To be perfectly honest it’s not her I’m holding my breath for.”...

lol...very much jack.

Ooh, I LOVED this! I like how you made Jack's statements so...ambiguous, exactly like how he talks in the movies.