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first lieutenant riza hawkeye
2009-08-24 . chapter 14
oh my gosh! this is the cutest and most perfect fic yet! except for the part it's not complete and all...
and roy and riza as children are so the cutest litte things!
oh PLS continue this is the best and i mean THE BEST AND MOST PERFECT FIC EVER! PLS! PLS! CONTINUE UNTIL THE END! and i hope it ends in being their tenager life or at least when they're 23 or something and hen end it with a: then they lived on how they're living now.but i hope there are more cute chapters maybe atLEAST 10 more or every year there's a chapter or something with the valentines and christmas and new year and halloween and birthdays oh and SCHOOL! tnx! oh and valentines isn't a stupid day it's my BIRTHDAY! :D pls continue this fic! tnx! love the fic!
ishmaranara
2008-11-05 . chapter 14
A good little series of stories I just found, I like the couple and simple yet nice life.
Arkueid
2008-11-03 . chapter 14
This is a very cute story, I just read it all recently and liked it a lot :) I hope you keep writing! Although, as you said is a little bit AU right now, is still very good! Don't let that bother you :D
Perennial Rhinitis
2008-10-31 . chapter 14
*giggles* You made my day! I'm so happy you've updated! *big hug* I am looking forward to seeing you! I hope your schedules match up. XD
winglessfairy25
2008-10-29 . chapter 14
Yep. AU since the manga chapter came out. But it's a good Alternative story.
It's a great chapter! Finally! He's thirteen already! haha. I see a little sort of crush developing there. XD Great work! :]

Rin
xXAddictedtoPockyXx
2008-09-19 . chapter 1
ERGH! PLZ UPDATE SOON!
Grace Raven
2008-08-18 . chapter 13
I like the story. Update soon.
xXAddictedtoPockyXx
2008-07-24 . chapter 13
This is such a CUTE story! I really love this idea of them being kids when they met (i know, i know Roy studied alchemy under Riza's father but that doesn't necessarily mean that they met). This story is very unique and I hope you keep up the good work!
Haikoui
2008-06-09 . chapter 13
AW I'm dying of the cuteness! *faints*
Perennial Rhinitis
2008-06-09 . chapter 13
*sniff sniff* I'll do my best to post a Royai Day fic too.
winglessfairy25
2008-06-09 . chapter 13
It's really really cute to see them this way. haha. Great chapter! More Royai too. Happy Royai day! :]

I really liked this chapter. I mean, Roy's really bent on becoming a state alchemist and his sisters see that too. I really like the Roy/Riza interaction here. Roy has a slight crush on Riza. hehe. Thanks for the update!

Rin
Tears of a Broken Sniper
2008-06-08 . chapter 13
Roy and Riza are so cute. This story is really cute! I hope you update soon.
causmicfire
2008-04-03 . chapter 7
So, Roy dog-ears his pages, my grandma wouldn't be very happy with him. She saw me do that once, and I got such a long lecture about taking care of books. Well, I don't do that anymore, probably because that lecture. XD

Great chapter. I like that both Hawkeye and Roy are thinking about fire, it's a great way to tie them together!
causmicfire
2008-03-03 . chapter 6
Poor Perenelle, I can imagine that it was a horrible, painful, way to die.

Mr. Hawkeye was probably devastated at seeing her corpse. I'm surprised they actually let him see it.

Oh, he's looking forward to having a student now, yay!

lol, Roy just doesn't understand girls yet.

Great chapter!
causmicfire
2008-03-02 . chapter 5
I really like the flashbacks. The first one is some great back story, and the second is so sad. I enjoy the way he answers her question about Perenelle not coming back, and the "oh, honey" at the end to convey that he realized how heartbreaking what he said may have been for Riza.

lol, silly girls already falling over Roy, eh?

And he's already got his Mustang confidence, does he have the smirk, too?

I'm very glad Riza used the word pianist instead of piano player, like the other girls.

Aww, a hair clip!

Hah! The first time Roy was rejected by Riza, although, she may not have rejected the offer if she hadn't been busy.
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