You should deffinally do a chapter on every character's POV. That would be awesome. That episode was very powerful, and made me cry at the end. This shows exactly what it's like, and how it feels to have a parent abandon there child.

This also helps you to truly understand Will a little more. You can understand why he always seems to find himself in all kinds of trouble, and why he always seems to act tough, even though he is truly a good guy who does not deserve this to happen to him ONCE, never mind twice. He's had a hard life, trying to fit in, and become that best that he can be, all the while having to bottle horrible things like this inside of him everyday of his life. However, through all this, even though it is terrible, hurts, and is no excuse, Lou did do one thing right: He taught Will what NOT to do, and how NOT to treat people.

Uncle Phil is one of my favorite characters on the show, who I have great respect for. He may be hard on Will, but it's because he truly cares and wants whats best for Will, and for all of the family. In my opinion, No other episode is more proof of that, than this one. What Uncle Phil said in the end of Chapter 1 couldn't be any more true. He is Will's father, no matter what anyone says. He's the one who's always been there for Will every time he was needed him, and shown him unconditional love. I only wish Will was born into the Banks Family. He would have had a much better life.

Jeffery is my other favorite character who I also have great respect for. As much as he acts like a wise guy and gives everyone a hard time, he too, cares for the family and you couldn't find anyone more loyal. I could totally picture Jeffery going at it with Lou. Who better to tell Lou what he needed to hear than someone who knows exactly what he's talking about. Jeffery also had a son one episode, but didn't know about it until many years later. So here we have Jeffery, who never even had a chance to be a good father to his son, but wished that he could be. And then, we have Lou, who has his son right there, and he couldn't even care less. Messed up stuff.

Anyway, excellent fanfic, and I look forward to reading the next chapter when it comes out. Take care.

This a touching story I love it and it makes me sad because things like this happans all the time father abandoment and all.

Wow, I never knew that Jeffery would do something like that. It just goes to show that there is more to him and you have proved this wonderfully. When exactly are you going to post thr 3rd chapter up? It's been ages!

Aww, it just goes to show that Phil does care about Will even though he has a go at Will most of the time xD Well done with this.

I love this story, you should write more in this fandom.

thats really good you told the story really well

hey. i love the fresh prince of bel-air. and the sencond paragraph is almost word-for-word from an episode i have watched. I was just telling you. I know this episode. You're suppossed to make up your own story. Thats why its called fanFICTION.

Such a warming story! please update!

It's Sara! :) I haven't read any Fresh Prince before...but I'm glad I read this! It was like a trip down memory lane. I'm going to have to find Fresh Prince reruns to watch now! Thanks for the emotional snippet. You know how much I like emotions... ;)

anytime..but dag i ment cool.lol..

dag gurl.this was col. =)

Go Jeffery! I can imagine that as polite and professional as Jeffery may be, that felt DAMN good to say to Will's "father"! The man really needed to hear it too.
Wonderfully written hon!
Tracyboo

DUDE THAT FIC WAS THE BEST! I KEEP READING IT i really wish you would answer your yahoo messanger, iv tried emailing you cause i wanted to see if you wanted to do a phil/will comfort. I'm writing stories and i really would like to role play with someone like you ^_^

That was great!

great story keep up the good work