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BubbleBaZooka 2008-09-13 ch 9,	abuseThat was great! I love how you put in end AN the 'Decepticon Moustache-man'! :3 Thanks for writing such wonderful stories!
kinatsurune 2008-08-14 ch 9,	abuseWow, that was really fun to read! Interesting plot, and it was nice for once to find a story that wasn't overloaded with romantic tensions, whether it's between humans or human-transformer (weird...) I really liked your Nimbus character - probably because I always like reformed characters. It was really cute how humble Nimbus was, made me want to just hug him!
HitokiriKurisuta 2008-03-17 ch 9,	abuseI can honestly say that this in the ONLY fic I've ever read in which I grew to love a whole slew (sp?) of OCs as individual characters. You did wonderfully with giving them each their own personalities and quirks. Took me a little while to be able to keep track of some of the scientists, but I got the hang of it after a while. lol Alright, original characters aside, that was really, REALLY fun. It was wonderfully written, had an entertaining and original plot, and it took a decidedly different focus/route from any other fanfic I ever remember reading. (I especially liked the bit that Kristine (I think it was her...) explained about everything they had done totaling to a 30 second clip in an action movie. That was /gold/.) I don't see enough ficticious literature that takes sciency turns. (Even in the realms of sci-fi, they seem to focus more on fantasy with little dashes of technology here and there, and that's it.) Authors seem to be afraid of either losing their audience's attention or simply of doing the research necessary to write it effectively. Glad to see this was not the case for you. ^_^ And back to the OCs...I believe I'm now a squeeling fangirl for the Irene/Coldfront pairing. XD I'm not mistaken in seeing the beginnings of a real relationship between those two, am I? I scanned your list of fics and I didn't see any one-shot continuations of this plot-line up yet (understandable, considering you only finished putting this up a little over a week ago), but I'd love to see more of those two later on. ^_^ ...Same goes for Nimbus. X3 You've made me a squeeling fangirl for him as an individual, too. (Just want you to know how much of a revelation this is for me. O.o I NEVER turn into a fangirl for OCs...)
HitokiriKurisuta 2008-03-16 ch 6,	abuseRandom thing I noticed while reading: You said "Nimbus" at one point where I think you meant to say "Coldfront". It's just after the very last "o" thingy in Chapter 6.
Riana1 2008-03-11 ch 9,	abuseYou finished in a most brilliant coda. Nimbus, Irene, and Coldfront shine in your works. They were your most stunning victory in this story (along with a proactive plot that had me reeling). I urgently ask that you visit your characters again soon-- I would adore to see more of them.
TheWatcherandReader 2008-03-09 ch 9,	abuseI guess, then, to save myself a whole lotta trouble, I have to put you on my alerts list. Wunderbar. The effort of clicking on the relative box is almost too much for me, though. Ah well, I guess it'll be worth it, or at least, it had better be, hmm? Don't disappoint, now. Job well done and all that. Keep on updating.
Fire From Above 2008-03-09 ch 9,	abuseThat was a nice and fitting ending for your story. I especially like how some of the Autobots got their own humans. Nice to see Nimbus getting along with everyone a bit better as well. Thank you for the great story and I look forward to reading your future work.
Twisted Midnight Dreams 2008-03-08 ch 9,	abusesniffle I'm so sad! It's OVER! sob but I'm really glad you wrote this fic. 5 stars! And I'm glad that you're making that oneshot series thing. adds to personal HALL OF FAME
too lazy to log in 2008-03-08 ch 9, anon.	abuseFantastic story! I absolutely love Irene - she's one of the best OC's I have ever seen! You managed to make her smart and witty and humourous without making her...unnaturally perfect? Great story, looking forward to the oneshots!
Ladyofthebookworms 2008-03-08 ch 9,	abuseAw! I'm gonna miss this...(puts you on alert for any one-shots)
mmouse15 2008-03-08 ch 9,	abuseCongratulations! It looks wonderful. I like how you've wrapped everything up, and I have to say that Irene and Coldfront really rock my boat - they're terrific together! I like the research you did on the figs and how realistic you made the entire situation. This was a wonderful read.
SkyHighFan 2008-03-08 ch 9,	abuseI like it. You should do a full sequel. So you have Nimbus with Mikaela (I thought you were gonna put him with Cahler after you mentioned how good they were getting along) and Irene with Coldfront. That one I like: those two made a bit of a funny pair. The rambler and the stoic. Sam killed Megatron and destroyed the Allspark so at least there's hope for peace and if one Decepticon could realize he was wrong and change sides there's a chance the rest could too. I've read a story where most of the Decepticons, including Soundwave and Starscream changed sides because they wanted peace and another where Starscream activly joined the Autobots after Megatron's killing, first because he didn't want to be killed, and then after re-joining the Decepticons for a few days came back on his own and helped defeat his former comrads including Soundwave and Skywarp.
Heather 2008-02-12 ch 8, anon.	abuseWhen is chapter 9 coming? I love this story!
mmouse15 2008-01-24 ch 8,	abuseHating to be picky, but there's still beta notes - the one sentance that lost a word (says the beta who left you the note...) But other than that, it looks great! I do really, really like this fic. The OCs work, the story works, the action is solid and well written, it's really good. And I'm glad you posted a link on LJ to all your fics. (sorry it took a couple of days to make it here. RL and all that).
Fire From Above 2008-01-23 ch 8,	abuseFor the side reference, I'm guessing Wheeljack. Nice action you got in here. I feel happy that more characterization is coming out of the OC's. Great job. However, what was with all the beta sidenotes? Did you forget to delete them or something?

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