 Blade-Rose 2009-11-26 . chapter 5Yay! He's out of the shed! |
 Thriff 2009-08-09 . chapter 5No more little kids beating up on Kenshin? lol. It's alright. Kenshin needed to get out of the shed anyway. This is good for him now. Anyway, Kenshin doesn't seem to be getting any pain out of this save for sore wrists, a bad headache, and maybe an aching bum from sitting in the shed too long. lol. Can not wait for the next chapter. |
 Thriff 2009-08-09 . chapter 4Kenshin sits in the shed... lol. That would indeed be a better name. The poor guy just sits there and sits there and sits there. He must get quite bored by those walls constantly staring back at him. Maybe Kenshin even has nightmares about those shed walls. lol. |
 Thriff 2009-08-09 . chapter 3Kenshin beat up by a little kid... lovely. It was quite funny. Going to keep reading this most definitely. |
 Thriff 2009-08-09 . chapter 2Lovely. Kenshin has gotten himself into another fine predicament. Your stories are always so great - short, simple, to the point but with action and enough detail to keep a person hooked uncannily well. It is nice to see another story - though revolving around the central idea similar in many stories - being produced in a different and refreshing manner. |
 PuccaGyRl 2009-07-11 . chapter 5love this story,
are you writing more? |
 Jenaminya 2009-05-16 . chapter 5This is good, I hope you write more soon! |
 moeru himura 2008-12-28 . chapter 55 chapters already? Where was I all those times? XD
I just love your OCs. They keep getting better and better. And your storytelling has improved as well.
I hope you don't mind me adding this story to my C2. ^^ |
 ZukoFlame 2008-11-21 . chapter 5I love it so far! You've got me hooked! please update soon! |
 kokoronagomu 2008-08-17 . chapter 5Ö GASP!! *falls over*
such a wonderful tale, full of emotion and suspense.
i know life happens and i sincerely hope you are in excellent health and you are successful and happy. i also hope you are not going to leave your readers hanging from that little dot at the end of that sentence and at the top of that imposing cliff!!
bribes? chocolate? your writing is eloquent but i can offer to beta read? cut somebody's brakes? ...well, not really. (twist your ar...)
please continue.
♥genuflections and groveling,
ginny |
 nancy 2008-07-30 . chapter 5 I loved ur story! please write more! and when u do write more please e-mail me and let me know!! I still don't know how this fanfiction sites work to well. (although i love them XD) and when u do e-mail me, please introduce yourself as a fanfiction writer so i won't think it's spam by mistake and delete it --_--;; please write more and let me know when the next chapter is up I can't wait! (^O^) |
 Chibi Binasu-chan 2008-07-05 . chapter 5Yay!
This is cool. Good idea, haven't seen such work in a long time... guess I haven't been around for a while. *sigh* Well, this was really good, and I hope you keep going! Keep it up!
~Chibi |
 Aya-Shoru 2008-05-15 . chapter 5Gasp! Are you writing more? THis is so good. |
 Blunablue 2008-04-26 . chapter 5I really like Kenshin as a "fresh Rurouni" in this fic. By throwing him into the enemy's village you create many possibilities for outer and inner conflicts -And you make use of them very well. I like little Akiyama and the old and wise Yasua who does not really know what to make of Kenshin. His decision to kill him in spite of his doubts is understandable and Kenshin's reaction very in character. But with the appearance of the bandits the story takes an surprising turn - action!! And Akiyama chooses the enemy for helping his shishou... so please, upadate soon before another 5 months have passed |
 Mustang Spirit 2008-03-10 . chapter 1And Kenshin is in trouble once more! XD The poor guy can never seem to stay out of trouble with you holding that writing pen. *rofl* Well can not wait to see what the rest of this story is going to hold... There will be torture, yes? No matter, though, onwards with the reading and enjoying of damned good writing! |