Cool story. :)

Loved this *-*

Really, great story DD

Sam just did what he had to do... I feel sorry for the guy, but maybe if he could control himself he would kill himself anyway

Well, I really enjoyed it

See ya

Rosetta

That was a very good story, and very ... sad. In a way. It just shows that ... the exterior is just for show anyway. Bad things can happen to everyone. Well done!

Wow. I think I'm a little bit speechless. As you may have gathered, there are few things I enjoy more than Dean whumpage. This fic wasn't just fun to read-as your fics always are-it was also sort of brilliant. The idea of having someone with a normal life that Sam covets end up being the killer blew me away. This story was well structured and well written. You captured the boys perfectly. I just sort of sat there for a few minutes after I read it and let it sink in. This is just a fantastic piece of writing and I am supremely jealous.

wow. okay, I am absolutely loving your stories. they make me cringe, but your writing is amazing.

...sigh...

Yet another one I could happily have read chapters more of. Fantastic pace, wonderful characterisations, insightful insight (strange that) and really heartfelt poignancy about Sam's longing for normalcy and his love for Dean.

Yeah... just so ... right!

Wow, what a ride. Love the way you started with Dean being hurt and then backtracked. Your style is so compelling and graphic and tough, makes the story compulsive reading from beginning to end.

RIP Jeff the Walmart Manager! Loved your story!

Thank You

Cat

Another fabulous story. Sam seems a little less cavalier towards Dean and his injuries in this one, have to admit I like the subtle shift in tone. Wonderful plotting, I could visualise the whole thing so easily. Well done!

All hail Dean whumpage! Very nicely done, I love protective Sammy.

Another terrific fic. I love how you write protective Sam and hurt, vulnerable but still badass Dean. These oneshots are so well laid out, beautifully edge-of-your-seat paced. A super mix of action, introspection, angst and humor - truly entertaining stories.

Good story and great writing. Caught the interest right from the beginning and held it till the end. Great stuff. :D

Ah...sweet, beautiful Dean whumpage, my favorite...and you write it so well that it makes my heart happy!

Over protective, kick ass Sammy rocks! I love that he was so envious of Jeff the Walmart manager because his supposed normal life and all the while Jeff has been possessed...guess he didn't have it made after all.

My favorite scene,

"At the car he props Dean against the back passenger door. Sam’s going through his pockets, trying to find the keys to the Impala and Dean wants to help him out but he has no clue which pocket wins bingo. He starts to fold again and Sam steps up against him, pins him to the car with his hip, both hands still on reconnaissance in his multiple layers of clothing.

‘How many fucking pockets do you have?’

Twenty-five, Dean thinks and wants to laugh. But instead his head tips and comes to rest against Sam’s collarbone. His brother smells like engine oil, like the inside of the warehouse, and Dean’s stomach pitches. He retches and almost holds it, but the smell combined with the jostle of Sam’s shoulder as he searches for the keys flips the toggle on the scales. Sam almost cops it straight down the right leg of his jeans but he backs up in time. The keys are jingling in his hand as he steps away."

There' just something so freaking adorable about Dean when he's all hurt and he lets Sammy take care of him. Just makes me say aw.

Cookies for you, write more soon!

This was good. I really enjoyed the way you told the story.

Great story. Good interaction between the boys, awesome Dean whumpage, good Sam angst. Can't believe they left the gun! Very fast-paced, tense look at their lives. Liked the reality of Jeff being possessed and them hunting him with Sam's fantasy of Jeff and his wife and the bath beads.