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Blue-Eyed Chica
2007-07-08 . chapter 1
i like! sept did u mean firmly or family...?
Erin (don't wanna log in...:)
2007-07-07 . chapter 1
PERTYFALL!
You're awesome at poems!
OH CRAP!!
I forgot, i'm your beta!
Send me anything if you want it spell and grammar checked, kaii?
I'll have more time, now it's holidays.
x
Novicewriter
2007-07-07 . chapter 1
cool, I think you should try to make it flow a little better, this is a little choppy, but good all the same.
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