 rappelezfille 2009-12-09 . chapter 5Well-written. Interesting in how it switches from vignettes of his abuse to vignettes of his convalescence... |
 Phoenix80hp 2009-01-19 . chapter 5Oh I really like this story! I hope you update soon! |
 VexenIV 2008-09-09 . chapter 5god...I feel so sorry for Sora. D=
Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^ |
 Rydia Asuka 2007-12-05 . chapter 5One word: amazing. This story was brilliantly done. The characters are loveable, and the storyline is interesting. I really like how you're splitting it up into the different timelines and aspects. His life before, after, and the courtroom. It's all very well done.
Overall a fantastic job, keep up the excellent work! =D |
 rose.tinted.lies 2007-11-26 . chapter 5Gwah! I only just saw that this story'd been updated! (issues with internet and the like = not being able to check my email).
I have to say, seeing my name in the beginning Author's Note made me grin alot, even if it was a small mention. This is such an amazing story and you're such a wonderful author, it kind of made my day. Especially since I was in a foul mood beforehand.
-coughs- Anyway! The actual chapter?
Amazing! I loved it. Alot.
Sora is just so adorable, in everything he does I almost start squealing at the cuteness, even though it's so sad, the way his mother treats him and everything he's gone/going through. I love how you write Riku. The way he shows concern, but does it in a kind of calculating way, not letting Sora know he knows until the last second. The way he helps Sora through things is really sweet, too.
Well, I'm rambling now. But this was a lovely chapter, and I was surprised when I looked at the review count. Something this good should be up in the thousands! ^^
-anxiously waiting for the next chapter- |
 RenRenTheGreat 2007-11-24 . chapter 5Well, my review's coming a bit late, but its the thought that counts, right? xD
Silly Sora, use ovenmitts the next time the kitchen's on fire :] And think of lies ahead of time, Riku might believe them more. ...okay, maybe not, he's too smart for that D<
Love from the interwebz~ |
 LiteraryMirage 2007-11-20 . chapter 5Oh Sora...poor lad! And dammit, Riku should have been more persistent in making Sora get help. >_< I'm really enjoying how you are slowly unfolding more of the backstory, while interweaving flashes of the present. Very nicely done! I look forward to reading more of this! |
 Wilixer 2007-11-19 . chapter 5This has become one of my favorite stories. Take your time updating! :) |
 darkangelwings90 2007-11-19 . chapter 5oh my god! i love this!! *cries* you have got to update more often! i love this story! thank you so much for this updadte!
will riku come out and tell sora thet he thinks it's abuse? |
 Cheerful-Pessimist 2007-11-18 . chapter 5...wow
another deep chapter - for some reason this one made me extremely sad and now i feel all sad, i'm probably attaching myself to the story too much, but that's the fault of your wonderful writting skills,
hurry and write the next chapter, plz?
- C.Pess |
 Thegreathippothief 2007-11-18 . chapter 5 Yay! another chapter.
Aw Sora is so sweet in this.
But what's even more awesome is you got Cid in there. (gotta love Cid)
Loved this chapter (though I love all of them).
Can't wait for the next! |
 Aoi Para 2007-11-18 . chapter 5Ah! My eyes refuse to blink! I want to keep reading but there's nothing left to read!
Silliness aside, I love the way this is written. I'm one to gravitate to things that are more confusing in structure since I write like that too. The pieces are coming together pretty easily. And this is the first fic in my roving today that I don't want to beat down with a broom and demand a rewrite simply because (plot aside) the writing was crap. Both the writing and the plot are excellent so far. I can't really point anything out that bugs me. Can't wait for an update. I'm looking forward to seeing where this will go. |
 shiki1696 2007-11-16 . chapter 4Write soon! |
 FaLlEn-AnGeL627 2007-10-29 . chapter 4love it update soon please |
 RkR 2007-10-01 . chapter 4I really can't figure out WHY you haven't that many reviews. I absolutely adore this story (maybe I'm going overboard, but it's true). Anyway.
I really like the title, and how you wrote up the story (it's teasing-like, yes), and it makes me want to read more (laugh).
It's just so interesting and and inviting read, you're really talented.
Anyway, I'm going to be looking forward to another chapter!
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