Simply brilliant.

Hm L O V E D this! I'm a sucker for first kisses and that one was totally yummy. Even though you put them into our timeline, they were so very well recognizable!! *happy sigh*

So, after reading this, I have managed to come to one major conclusion:

I love your fluff.

Which is actually a weird sentence when you think about it out of context, but it holds true. This is great. Characterization! Witty dialogue! My old friends! Fantastic.

"Startled by the sudden presence of Jack’s mouth against his, David did the first natural, rational thing: he dropped his popsicle."
I will admit, that full-on made me laugh out loud.

Great. Great great great. More please.

Wow, from smooching all the way to showersex? *raised eyebrow* Heehee. But seriously, as with everything you write (I'm so repetitive) this is great. I love David's character especially -- grumping about how Jack talks him into stuff, but knowing that it's because he *likes* being with Jack. Very him.

'both were surprised at the other's lack of surprise.'
indeed!
'what did you plan that or something?"
HAA!
oh man, so, so lovely and summery and now i HAVE to have a popsicle, naturally. gahh javid. gahh david dropping his popsicle.
oh and the kids fighting with lightsabers.. clever! :)

Ooh-la-la! ^_^ This is such a cute story. I like the popsicle part, and how Jack said that if he dropped it it'd match his shirt. Great story.

This was an awesome story! Jack/Dave isn't my favorite, but I was desperate and half mad for a good slash story. And I found one, haha. Yay for popsicles!

Much love,
~Liams Kitten~

I read it over the refuge already, but seeing it up here made me want to read it again... it's so cute!
David is adorable. And I loved how you described them, davey being the preppy and jack being the jock. and the popsicle part was great.
Again, fabulous job, as usual!
-Braids

oh, i very much enjoyed this. i don't think i'll be able to look at popsicles the same way again for some time now :D good job!

Sweet and Sweaty.
I don’t think that I will ever view a popsicle the same way again.

Your description of Jack stretched out on the banister in his little soccer shorts painted a beautiful picture in my mind.

Favorite line:
“David’s eyebrows knit over his popsicle-blue eyes and Jack wanted to kiss him again just for that. So he did.”

*SIGH*

This was positively delightful.

(And you get 10 extra points for David’s thankyouverymuch. That was dead-on David.)