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MEL
2007-09-18
ch 1, anon.
abuse:sigh: That was too sweet love Mommy Jordan and Daddy Danny. Danny would be mush around his baby girl.
Braveryruns
2007-07-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey,

I really liked your fic and it is one of the better s60 stories I've come across. I def. urge you to continue or to start another new story for us to enjoy. Just one thing though, in the following line there are two errors.

“You’re partner’s in crime,” he elaborated, “Who told you?” he demanded and Jordan was at this point more than lost,

It should be "Your partners in crime,"

I probably wouldn't have noticed if there hadn't been two mistakes in the same sentence, and just thought I'd point it out to you.

But really, great job.
Cotton Candy Ass
2007-07-07
ch 1,
abuselovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelove it =)

I absolutely insist you write more lol.

Ek that was so good. How cute was Danny with Rebecca... and I could totally see Matt holding the baby aw =)
JonathanTaylorThomasFan
2007-07-07
ch 1,
abuseI loved it update soon please
Jayne Leigh
2007-07-07
ch 1,
abuseomg! love it!! yay a new s60 fic! you so need to write more!!
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