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| angelic lily 2007-12-04 ch 1,  | abuseomg too cute and too funny! i love all the character interactions and renji abuse XD |
| Pyric 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abuseIf you could see how much I'm smiling right now, knew how much that made me laugh... I guess I have to just tell you how much of a genius you are. You're a genius. There. Did that help? Fave. |
| khooxp 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseah...pls write more...i want to read... |
| animelover143 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abusei loved it! HILARIOUS! |
| SxStrngSamurai13 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, I LOVED this. This was so damn funny! The dialogue was very well done; good characterizations and just fun to read everybody dog on Hitsugaya. The descriptions of his expressions were priceless. Keep up the great work, I hope to see more Bleach fics! |
| Jerkess 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abusePoor, flustered Toushirou! Well, he needs a reprieve from work. I think he would do well with Yuzu...as she's sorta like Hinamori. xD Anyhow, very funny, and a good read overall. *Poor Renji seems to be the recipient of many of Whitey's anger problems, no*? -Jerkess |
| LilBrokenDolly 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was so much fun to read! The recurring jokes (damn that Abarai!) were well placed and extremely amusing. It does not surprise me that Renji is the one getting manhandled here. He is so easy to pick on! I am looking forward to your updates. FYI, I'm a HitsuMatsu shipper...so I'm definitely hoping for that! Great work! |
| kitsunefire 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! Everyone seemed in character and I can't say that I noticed any grammatical issues. I enjoyed it. |
| alisonette 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI love this story, it's hilarious! Thanks for writing it! I particularly like Hitsugaya and Matsumoto, just everyone's interaction in general is great. It almost has an omake-type feel to it - if omake were long. Could there be a sequel? I'd love to see the continuing adventures of Shiro-chan and his annoying matchmakers when they get to the human world, particularly after ep 132 as HitsuKarin is no partially canon. There are also too many great opportunities with Hitsugaya living in Orihime's apartment! Anyways, thanks again! |