LOOL! NATSUKI PLUSHIE?! I want that, so bad. XD I want the Shizuru plushie too.. So hard to decide which I want more. XD
I really like the last sentence there. It was a great end to a humorous and cute story. Thanks for the great read. :D

O.O You know how sometimes you're lost for words or simply the English language can't provide you with them? This is now the time. I enjoyed reading it...that much I know. But as for a real comment, I can't find any. Hmm...^_^

I know I'm entirely wrong in my assumption here but I couldn't help thinking how ideal this fic would be for that short space in time in between where Shizuru and Natsuki had died and when they reappeared at the end of the Mai HiME series. I mean, they had to be somewhere right? And this seems a good a purgatory as any.

And why, why do you have to be so good at writing the heart breaking emotions? Gawd, I've been reading your stories and wanting to bawl my eyes out! Give me something happy! *sniff* Fluff makes all things better. Yup.

And now... I've been up for over 30 hours (and perhaps that's why I'm not making much sense now), hardly gotten any writing done, and am behind on my betaing so I shall head to bed with a heavy heart and have nightmares of Shizuru and Natsuki suffering all because of you! :P Well, the heavy heart anyway... Luckily my gf can offer plenty of snuggles to ease the strain on my poor heart... or you'd be in serious trouble! ;) Oh gawd, I'm going to sleep, not making sense at all. lol

And if I didn't put it across... excellently written story. Keep 'em coming! ^^

Several painstaking minutes and re-reads later, time for a review. A very confused review, since I still don't understand. Two dreams and one possible reality at the end, one of Natsuki's insecurity, one of Shizuru's fraying sanity. Or something like that, since I think my comprehension skills died. It was good though. Good and sad and sweet. I feel guilty for not reading it before, but there are so many new stories...
Thanks for the read.
~Naolin

oops i forgot to login on my comment XD Still a good story!

The story was very discirptful. Lots of discription. I felt liek there was alot of thinking and like it didn't really go anywhere... But still good ^^ wouldn't suprise me if one day you were righting books

Nice, pretty nice, this fic reders pretty well the atmosphere of the last episodes and the light they cast on Shizuru and Natsuki.

That was awesome, Wolf. So friggin' awesome [to say the least, of course. ;)]. Wonderful, beautiful. Well done.
-Dster

Wow. Scary as hell as well as very confused. Well written though. This was very introspective and delves deep into ShizNat's relationship. It was very good for a first time fic. I look forward to more of your works.

Wow, such a...marvelous story. The way you went into the dream world, and portrayed it was wonderful. I greatly enjoyed reading this story; you did a fantastic job on this :D

;-; *sniffs* Me no likey when Natsuki and Shizuru both disappeared. It felt sad and lonely. But the last sentence was the happiest one in the whole fic. =3

Dreaming a dream in a dream huh? Confusing.

*pokes Wolf* Psst, saw some grammer mistakes.

wow it is really good.beautifully written.liked it a lot

first time?huh? wow this is good...so good...I hope u'll continue in some way...don't really know how...Arigatto gozaimasu for sharing! T_T