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| Stargatecrazy 2008-08-27 ch 28, | abuseOMG! This was brilliant! Absolutely loved it! I could actually imagine that Mathos creep...glad he got what was coming to him! Love all the relationships. Especially the Jack/Teyla brother/sister one! And the slight Jack/Sam one...and of course the Sparky one! I am now off to read the second fic!! SGC |
| charmedones65 2008-08-12 ch 28, | abusei love the story write more soon |
| Crystal 2008-05-02 ch 28, anon. | abuseHey, I love your writing and am dying to read more so please hurry up with the second installment because you said it would be up shortly and it has been like 2 weeks, not to sound accusing or anything but... Great story, i can't wait to see what john got Elizabeth for christmas, nd i can't wait for more John/Elizabeth. Hope to see more soon!! |
| hannah 2008-04-26 ch 28, anon. | abuseyou have to carry this on its great im really intrested in elizabeths story so plz plz plz carry it on thanks x |
| belanna30 2008-04-21 ch 28, | abuseFantastic! I SO want to know what John gave Elizabeth! The letters and what they end up doing with their time. I'm also begging to know what the "long story" was. Anyway, there are so many things I want to know... I can't wait for the next story. I'm adding you to my author alert so I can be sure to pick up when you post something new! |
| Bunnylass 2008-04-20 ch 28, | abuseAn awesome last chapter! Loved it. Actually i loved the whole story, it was wicked. Bring on round two! Or part two anyway, lol. Thanks for the last update. Peace out, : ) |
| Jammeke 2008-04-20 ch 28, | abuseI loved this chapter. Christmas makes for wonderful stories :) It's a shame Jack and John had to go, because... a Sheir christmas would have been nice... but they'll have the rest of their lives for that :) The cake bit was brilliant, I really liked it. Looking forward to more!! |
| Bite Beccy 2008-04-19 ch 28, | abuseHmm, i can't wait for part two :) I'm dying to know what is up with Elizabeth and her dad..very curious. And glad to know there'll be more sparky love next time :D! |
| Steph7085 2008-04-19 ch 28, | abuseThis chapter is fab! I love all the 'typical' character moments, so amusing and cute! Can't wait for the next part...could I have it now? Hehe |
| sparklyshimmer2010 2008-04-19 ch 28, | abuseSPARKY COOKIES! lots of cookies! yay! *dances* *laughs madly* *takes bite* Thanks! Im very happy now. Wow everyone leaving got confusing! lol, nice goodbye with Ronon and Teyla ;) *munches cookie* And of course Teyla and Elizabeth would get lectured! *drinks milk* Teyla is funny, trying to sneak a present in. so very nice last chapter! Cant wait for the next part (and shippyness!) |
| jiskah 2008-04-19 ch 28, | abuseOh poor Elizabeth stuked with Teyla over Christmas *lol* Huh no mistle toes? Dammit, that would have given a perfect chance for John and elizabeht to get there first kiss I first thought the boys are going to cancel theri holidays at home for the girls jusrt to bsure there will be no one who ist going to harm rthem especially after the most girls didn“t like the idea of an arrested Mathos I am wondering if there is something going to happen to the girls over christmas |
| kuroima 2008-04-19 ch 28, | abuseOMG! The last chapter?! No! *cries* I hope you upload the next part very very soon! It was a very good and interesting start for this series I can't wait for the following parts (which I hope are a lot...). I loved the part of Teyla's Dad apologizing so often that was cute. And typical for Jack with the cake and chocolate but very funny. And Teyla...typical too. lol |
| saphiretwin369 2008-04-19 ch 28, | abuseMaybe Vala would have fun shopping in Alteran City during the Christmas rush? Lol. I like how Teyla DID stop Jack from making himself fat. I also like the ending with Teyla trying to look at her presents. Lol. Now that you're done you can start the sequel! ;) |
| FeedtheFlames 2008-04-19 ch 28, | abuse*sigh...* definitely one of my favorite stories :D |
| Bunnylass 2008-04-17 ch 27, | abuseWoah! Tough thing for Teyla to have to do, re-telling it all. So glad she has the rest of them though. Not a big surprise girl's are threatening, and congratulating them all. But i loved the very last part. So typically Jack, love 'im. Can't believe its coming to an end already. But im really looking forward to the next part : ) Thanks for the update. |