Story love! :) It was a great read, thank you for sharing it!

This story was very good. It was sad and funny and ended on a good note.

Haruhi's character seems fine to me...

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lol from the eplogue i like id i liked your whole story it was interesting funny, sweet and exciting i need to read more story about them now_

oh my you think to that hikaru and kaoru a re like fred and george
i thionk it would be the funniest thing when these 4 met, by the way i love your story its amazing and cool

I read this story after "The Labyrinth" and I loved it just as much (if not more) Both stories made me laugh several times (this does not occur often) They were both really great stories and I hope that you write more! :) You are officially one of the few Authors on my favorites list (a self-proclaimed "honor")

Adorable! You do subtle very well. Again I love how in character everyone is. The elements you added into both of these stories are some of my favorite settings/things. Labrinth is one of my favorite movies.

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You are very good at writing chapter ending. I liked this one quite a bit.

I found this chapter to be rather cute.

XU I loved the story, but I'm wondering about the twins? o.o did they calm? did they still try to attack her constantly? XD I think too much.

Lovely story :D

Oh wow! I loved the epilogue. Well, the whole thing was amazing, but that scene was just so RANKA. And Haruhi all perfectly calm about it too.

The best Nekozawa story I've ever read EVER! Lovz it so much Haruhi and him are such a cutesy couple. Meep, I'm fangirling like Renge now... muahaha. I loved the epilogue, it made me crack up so hard! 11/10 points! (don't ask why the numbers are necessary, its late at night)

First of all, I love your Host Club stories. Adorable and romantic and not badly written. However, it holds the same problem for me as the Harry Potter book series, and this problem causes me to feel immense disappointment. Nothing was solved and Haruhi was continuously controlled. I can't tell you how emotional I got reading the select dramatic chapters, starting with six. I won't go into my reasons, as I feel foolish getting so worked up over a simple fanfiction, but know that your story did indeed invoke powerful emotions; a great skill to have as a writer. I wish you luck with your future stories. Keep up the good work.

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