Nice. What's gonna happen? I feel really terrible for the Doctor, but I sympathize with Rose. This is one pickle they've found themselves in!! Not so much a pickle as a bad spot. I hope the Doctor and Rose can make up.

And a frying pan?? OMG, hilarious! Jackie's amazing!!

Very very good! Can't wait to read more :)

That was very insightful looking into the Doctors thoughts.

haha :) the end was funny lol ^_^ same old jackie though :D x
great story so far x update soon xx

oh...my...god this story is amazing what an amazing plot this story has a way of just drawing me in just like your others (namely your Sonic ones) all i am going to say is update quick please i want to read more

Very interesting. Great job :)

Very interesting :) keep up the excellent work!

i love this cant wait for more!


~Audrey~

ohh! nice, very nice. i'm interested!

Great chapter.

Great chapter.

Great chapter.

Really enjoying this.

Great start.