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Death Row's Oblivion
2008-09-01
ch 6,
abuseThis is a nice story. No actually, its awesome! Keep updating for us all. :D
wuming
2008-08-30
ch 6,
abuseCute! Like what you've done so far. Looking forward to more.
ShadowFangVII
2008-08-25
ch 6,
abuseawesome chapter
but i certainly am pulling for ino/naruto
sakura is too irritating
agent sabog
2008-08-25
ch 6, anon.
abusegood and exciting story, I can't wait for the next chapters already, so plz hurry-up!
Shirakawa Myself
2008-08-23
ch 6,
abuseOh, I'm such a sucker for spoilers, and there's a hint of Tsunade and Jiraiya floating around here ... I love you so much right now. I breathe spoilers.
However much trouble you may have had with the Sakura and Tsunade scene, would it reassure you to know that this end result is quite, quite fittingly brilliant? Those two are so similar in ways that they themselves do not recognise, and not just because of their teacher student relationship, and I also think that it is right for it to be Tsunade who puts forth the problem/circumstances, and Sakura to finish it off with the details that Tsunade herself would perhaps rather ignore than face. It's remarkably in character for these two.
I am quite curious to know about the incident with your friend and the ginseng tea, though :D
JoshK1o25
2008-08-23
ch 6,
abuseGo Ino! :)
Blood Zephyr
2008-08-23
ch 6,
abuse>.< NOW she gets it...
Aaron Leach
2008-08-23
ch 6,
abuseAwesome chapter update soon.
JPMod
2008-08-23
ch 6,
abuseBoy, talk about being clueless. Sakura seems more clueless than Naruto when it comes to love. She doesn't understand why she reacted so badly to Ino being with Naruto until she realized she was jealous.

So with Sakura knowing how she feels for Naruto, it seem the three-way triangle will becoming hotter. Just that with Naruto being clueless as he is, he'll have no idea what is going to happen. ;D

I look forward to the next chapter whenever it comes out. :)
Shadowblayze
2008-08-23
ch 6,
abuseYay!

I like your story!
Agent-G
2008-08-23
ch 6,
abuseI think the Tsunade/Sakura scene was the best scene in this so far. I wonder if that means she'll try and open up to Jiraiya before he goes off and gets himself killed fighting Pein like in the manga. But I really want to know if this is a Naruto/Ino/Sakura story or not as it pretty much seems like that, I just want to know in case I get disapointed later on and think I wasted a lot of time. (I've done that way too much lately)
KMT
2008-08-23
ch 6,
abusecool chapter
not many people focus on the parallels between Sannin 1.0 and Sanin 2.0
shelvesinthecloset
2008-08-22
ch 6,
abusewell, I am very excited to continue reading. I almost hope Sakura decides she doesn't want Naruto... as the Twilight Saga has completely quenched any interest I might have had in love triangles. All well, I'm sure I'll like whatever you decide.
Update soon!
goku90504
2008-08-22
ch 6,
abuseplease! let this be a ino/naru/saku please please the setup is to good for it not to be this could be one of the few realistic 3 way fic's
iamtehg
2008-08-22
ch 6,
abuseLove your story. It's very well written and your ideas come across so well that the story is many times better for it. Keep it up. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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