Whew! That was long! XD Aw, Ren and Horo keep chasing each other off...
If there's another part to this, I'd love to read it.

wow, this is great! can't wait to read more~!

Wow, I have never seen anyone write Ren's character like you have, an annoying, son of a * f-ing player. Sorry for the swearing...but Ren just really annoyed me...
Anyways, it was a alrighties story...kind of wished that Horo and Jun would actually do more to Ren than just saying "you know you shouldn't have done that." Truely hate people like Ren in this story...
Other than that...Ren was very ooc...and I think Horo and Hao were pretty much in character, loved the way how you protrayed them though...it was great! And my goodness, I loved how you made Hao surpress the urges to have sex with Ren! LOVE IT!