 Sairaiya 2007-07-08 . chapter 1ah not bad not bad. yeah i have to say maybe a lil bit odd but as naruto says i like odd people or in this case odd storys ^^
it was really cute and fun to read it. you got an really good writing style and grammar, contrary to me *laugh* ^^
yeah why odd or weird? cause of the fact this 17 years old girl is used to wet herself o.o both sakura and hinata's mom as well. seems like it is completely ordinary for a girl of this age... hmm.. i don't know. is it for real this ordinary? darn i'm a man i don't know sorry ^^ so please tell me, i really want to know this.
another thing i found in your story that really pleasures me is hinatas mother. yours is the first story i've ever read that contains a living "mrs. hyuuga", thats awesome! never in the real story u can read anything about her death, no one knows if she is alive or not, everyone is just interpreting she is dead, but she mustn't be dead. i think it was a great idea to put her in this story, job well done :)
aah yeah.. hm.. think there is something missing in my comment eh? aah darn it is 3 in the morning i gotta sleep *cry* stand up in only 4 hours.. *cries even more*
aah now i remember ^^ i love this pairing so much.. naruhina.. aah great there can't be anything false in this story if it is an naruhina. they are such sweet.. and your ending.. so much FLUFF, i love it :)
yep i think thats it. holy cr.. this comment is a bit longer than i was considering o.O aah anyway, remember i want to know about this peeing thing, so don't keep me in the dark about that k? ^^
with all good wishes an tired but satisfied Sairaiya. may the 'chakra' O.o be with you ^^ |