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Blackrose2005
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
-sniffs-
Such a sad ending...
But I loved it the whole entire time. ^^
Good job~

~BR
menteur honnete
2009-06-15 . chapter 1
I was looking at some of the other reviews for this, and there were mentions of Romeo and Juliet? I think it's better than that though, because, Romeo and Juliet, their love was very superficial. It was a "love at first sight" kind of thing--whereas here, it's different. You know the back story and they have a history. So I'd say it's better. And as for the genre...lol I don't see a lot of hurt/comfort going on. Maybe a lot of hurt, but not so much comfort. :) This was really well written though; the feelings and descriptions quite well worded.
mochiusagi
2009-05-11 . chapter 1
wah that was so sad! T^T but they were united in death!
MentalBreakdown
2008-11-07 . chapter 1
Thank you for this fic! I really enjoyed it, beautifully written!
Jacky-The-Ripper
2008-09-22 . chapter 1
What a nice story, but it's mis-categorized. Tragedy right, but hurt/comfort isn't in the story. No comfort was given to Suzaku or Lelouch, instead it should be under Tragedy and Romance.

I certainly like this ending. Though this would have left season 2 series with no main characters. Oh well, that's what the wonderful world of fanfiction is for!

4/5

Jacky-The-Ripper.
4everinuluvr
2008-09-09 . chapter 1
I have officially fallen in love with this story...this, in my (slightly sadistic) opinion, was absolutely gorgeous. Of course, i am a yaoi fangirl who loves tragedy and romance, so don't get me wrong, this was right up my alley. And yes, the ending does remind me a bit like Romeo and Juliet. The best song to read this story to is called Before Dawn by Isaac Shepard. It is beautiful, like the story you've written here.

Thank you,

4everinuluvr
LastxExile
2008-09-08 . chapter 1
Romeo & Juliet? Sorry I coudln't help but think of that at the end lol. Good story =]
kwainoir
2008-08-02 . chapter 1
This fiction made me almost cried.

At least, they were together at the end,right?

I really like this fiction so thank you for wrote it.
xXoceedxThexHeartlessx
2008-06-06 . chapter 1
Wow...this fic. So sad! Poor Lelouch. That line Suzaku said though "Wait for me..." So cute and yet so sad.

But the end...that was so unexpected, I swore I heard the gun shot. Poor Suzaku.

This fic was AWESOME! Good job
Val-Creative
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
I don't usually like suicide-ending stories but this fit appropriately with that last scene. Very sad and sweet. -hearts-

~ Val
Puroppu
2007-10-02 . chapter 1
beautiful! i loved it!! XDD
Pessimissed
2007-08-27 . chapter 1
Nice use of plagiarism you got going there, hun!

You're a real sweetie. Until you're finally able to write your own work, methinks that you should lay off copying mine and take some sort of writer's workshop.
Kgirl311
2007-08-24 . chapter 1
-sniffle-
That was great, I wish it would end like that. Poor Lulu and Suzaku.
Super fantastic story though, if it would end like this I could die peacefully myself, Xd.
aishoka
2007-08-01 . chapter 1
Thank you thank you thank you. That was beautifully written... and SuzaLulu! So much better than Sunrise's choice of closing pairing... grr. But yep, it was really well done, and you showed their reactions very nicely. The setting was v good too. Great job ^_^
Crispy Rice
2007-07-14 . chapter 1
It was very sad and sweet, thanks for posting!
It reminded me of Death Note's anime version
of his death, except Light had no one there
for him. I loved it :] I could imagine Lelouch's
sad smile ::tear::
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