secret secret

LOL...oh man, everyone has their reasons huh...lol...I like Kyouya very much so ah I'll make up my own reasons for why he wants her there

THANKS:"D

I do love the dynamic you have between Tamaki and Kyouya. It flows very naturally. And I love how once again Tamaki is last to know. Fantastic shot.

That was...scarily in character...how often have you read the manga to get that good? I could actually see it happening in my head as I went. Have you though to drawing part of this? Maybe just his going in, when he finds out and then the ending? Definitely going in my favorite stories list.

What a great fic! Simple and very enjoyable. :)

nice oneshot, very cute and silly. I really don't know how to describe this. THe last part is funny though. really funny.

Awe...how sweet. Haruhi's going to be there forever...muhahaha...

I liked this! The characters were great, and I love the big plush chair that could feed a small section of Africa for a year!! That was to die for! XD

Believeable characters, dialogue, furniture... you should write more!

aw, that's rather cute...there should be some sort of sequal to this of when she does find out, lovely work!

hahaha she's been earning money!? What happens when they finally tell her at graduation, she's gonna blow a freakin' fuse!! hahahah

this is really good =] it'd be cool if you continued writing the story n_n

The last line made me lol.
I really liked this story, hehe. :D

You definitely kept to the spirit of the series.

As to why they have three different springs, the series doesn't go chronologically... At least, I think that's the reason. I can't remember if that was stated or not. Meh. Oh well.

i really like the story i can see that convo happening

Wonderfully written; you manage to keep in character even the characters that aren't in the scene at the moment.
The interaction between Tamaki and Kyouya is perfect. Every little gesture that counts is measured in letters and put to work until it is panting. I could see the different grades of Kyouya's smiles perfectly, when usually I can only guess what an author meant when he wrote "smirk" for the gazillionenth time.

SPOILERS FOR THE SIXTH VOLUME OF THE MANGA COMING


Also, I had this image from the manga in my head: sixth volume, when Tamaki wins the crown -because Kyouya steps back in the last second to "save" Haruhi. And Kyouya's face is in the light -meaning, no shadowing, but for once, we can't see Tamaki's eyes, as if he was wearing a mask under his bangs.


END OF SPOILERS




“And if you ever look in my book again, I’ll beat you to within an inch of your miserable little life.” - and this was the perfect snapping of Tamaki's nose for infringing the laws that Mom settled. Hehehe.

The last sequence is great too. Calls back the darkness -it's really a dimly-lit café, really- that Tamaki has.

Going to my favourites.

To all of those who are wasting their time reading THIS review, please, stop now and go into the actual story.