Update please it's a good start to a story. I like it

Cute

I've thought about writing a story about a reunion among the characters, so your story intrigued me. I have to agree with the other reviewers in saying that it was very hard to read because it is all one paragraph and really should be spaced out more. It's also very generic and doesn't tell me anything that happened in the reunion at all. Like why was the school going to be torn down and why did Brian have everyone sign a petition to keep it? What have the characters been doing since graduation-or did they even graduate? Things like that would have made this story more interesting. I hope you'll expand your idea; or at the very least write a story that it much easier to read.

O my goes! I hope u con even tho its been lik 2yrs! I luv it!

I like it, post more

Cute

hahahaha. wait, this isn't a joke? sorry! i thought it was. my bad. but, seriously, please tell me this was a joke?

KEEP GOING! PLEASE! FOR THE LOVE OF HUMANITY!

What is there to say? This is no reunion its a very crap story and i think you need to jump of a bridge before you write another chapter because this one really bites big time you need a life and stop sitting around the computer and writting such shit as this one GET A LIFE seriosley for your own sake .

And find your imagination because you have obviously lost it in the big wide world

and another thing LEARN TO SPELL its claire not clair and so on...

Have a nice day :)

That was great! I'd love to see an actual reunion on tv or something! Great Job!

first of all this is one of my favorites movies it is hilliarious and i think that it would be funny to make another movie of all them together it may suck but still it would be interesting to see what all of them look like. i would deffinitly gop see the movie just to see how everything turns out i really like the whole idea of a breakfest club reunion

kids?

umm yeah - this is really hard to follow - maybe if you had some paragraphs and told whom was speaking and when, with some descriptions and such you'd have something. keep it up )

O my gosh! This was cute!

I'd find this story a lot easier to read if each time someone knew started speaking, you started a new paragraph.

The concept is interesting.