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Tears of Mercury
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseI'm so glad you've been sucked into the world of Eman fics. We make cannon cool enough to be UC. ;)

This was so well-written. I love the idea of Emma coming to Sean after nightmares, and it's so true to the show, too -- for some inexplicable reason, she's always had a way of showing her soft underbelly to him and no one else. Even if she has no idea how to admit she needs help or to ask for it, she still winds up going to him.

Your Sean was spot-on. He's grown so much these last few years, which unfortunately gets lost between some weaker writing on the show and a bunch of fans crying "emotional schmuk" every time he shows emotion. But here it's just the right balance and we see why their relationship works (even if the show's writers haven't understood this yet). I also loved that Christine came to warn him. For such a hands-off approach when it comes to Emma, she can be incredibly overprotective and overbearing sometimes, and her telling Sean that he just can't screw up this time had to be nerve-wracking for both of them.

The "touch" language you implemented with them was lovely also. Especially when we really saw how, for both of them, it did wind up leading to more verbal communication -- which if I'm not mistaken was rather the point of the one-shot. :)

Lovely work. I hope to see more from you in the future!

Rachael
Writer4eva123
2007-12-14
ch 1,
abuseThis is so cute! It's very well written and I find it nice but sad that Emma has to walk to Sean's place to go to sleep. I'm glad he's there for her, but she really needs to overcome JT's death.
2whak4wrds
2007-07-31
ch 1,
abuseAww. I love that. So much.
It was so sweet, so cute, fluffy, but the good kind of fluffy. The kind that leaves you smiling as you review.
Awesome story!
bananas.eat.grapes
2007-07-13
ch 1,
abusethis story hit me with such an intensity of emotions. you're an extremely talented writer.
teaparty
2007-07-10
ch 1,
abuseThe story is really cute. You managed to keep them in character yet lovey-dovey at the same time, which is always awesome.

The only thing that bothered me was how you switched points of view. I've glanced over some of your other stories, and it's much better when you stick to one -- it's less cluttered that way.
But yeah, besides that, I loved it. (:
LoverFaery
2007-07-10
ch 1,
abuseOkay. Well. I don't know these characters but I said I would read and review, so I am.

It was cute.

All I can ask of you is that you write something I'll actually get sometime, so that I may fully appreciate your talents.
MRS.SANTOS
2007-07-09
ch 1,
abusei really love this fanfiction. Semma is so cute i Please continue to write on this the way you write its really nice. So please finish writing chapters in her.

Maria A.K.A miss.kannon
shinylicious
2007-07-07
ch 1,
abuseReally sweet story!
samitiny
2007-07-07
ch 1,
abuseOMGOMGOMGOMG It's been so long since I've read a great Eman one-shot. That was amazing! I loved how they just knew eachothers looks, because that is so how those two are. I really loved this one-shot, it was so great!
MilitaryWife
2007-07-07
ch 1,
abuseAWESOME oneshot! This sounds exactly what would've happened after J.T.'s death. Good job!
EmmieBelle07
2007-07-07
ch 1,
abuseSo adorable. I love this story, it's great.
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