Wow, although you did a really good job at portraying Scar's point of view, it was easy to pick up on Nala's as well. I can just picture her sitting there thinking 'this guy is crazy' - it reminds me of Kovukono's King Scar, You So Crazy if you've ever read that. This was really, really well done to be honest with you. In fact, I'm gonna add it to faves.

Nice story gurl, I hope to read more from you soon.

"Nala, it roles off my tongue, like I hope the taste of her will do."

Oh, I like that! Very stalkery, lol, which fits the character perfectly.

Oh Scar, you are a lusty one aren't you?

Hi! It's been a while, ahaha.

Oh, wow, that was amazing! You described Scar's thoughts and emotions perfectly...it could have been exactly what he was thinking! Please, keep writing more!

-KS.

Hey that's good! Never thought of that! Good job! By the way thanks for reading my fic "Alone"

Creepy dude...

Very good story, interesting idea, I never thought about this movie like that. Nice, new view for an old movie. Well done! Keep on writing about such interestings points of view!

You know, it was an interesting view that i never thought of before. Seems like it also would explain alot of the plot in the movie. Have you written any Labyrinth fanfics? I love that movie! And normally, I read the fanfic stories there. But this was good also. Short and sweet. And very few errors in grammar. Thanx,

Dreams Of Dementia

Great story! Wow, I never knew that Scar wanted her so much, it was creepy. You described everything perfectly, their emotions, and Scar's point of view on Nala. Awesome.

awesome I loved it thank you

HOLY CRAP MAN. You do the freaky, possesive, I MUST HAVE LOVE MAKING AND NOW thing very well! I felt actual shivers when I read how creepy Scar was and how he MUST have Nala and just... Aw man, you're the awesome. I'm serious. Scar is your man! XD