so far this is a really good story.but i have one question: what is a nox and how do you kill them? but besides that the story is very good. i give you a 9 out of 10

well its not much of a challenge if you say that the part about the DHD and the stargate are from stargate

...wow

Well done, an interesting plot.

I guess this is it then. You're really leaving fanfiction? Well, I hope you know just how much of an impact you've made on the rest of the AF fanfiction. Good work. I have no doubt that you're name will be on a book someday.
Goodbye and good luck,
Lidia

Ugh. Why is everyone leaving me? Sure, all the new fics suck, but that's why we need to show them what QUALITY fictions are about. I caught a few Twilight references:
"...I didn’t know girls in real life actually stomped their foot on the ground in an argument. Quite melodramatic, don’t you agree?”

Andrea had to laugh. “Yes, only on television was my thought exactly.”

Haha, Jacob? And then the huge werewolf and the tiny vampire, only of course they don't hate each other. =]

My absoloute fav lines were:

“Do you know what’s really ironic? A Fowl sweeping my porch. Chop chop!” Andrea sat down on a bench in the corner. The little boy started to sweep with a sour look on his face.

“Daddy’s going to hear about this.”

LOL, reminds me SO much of Artemis, and Draco Malfoy. =]] Anyway, please re-think your decision. If not, then goodbye, ShanShanWinterjacket. I'll always remember last summer, and how great it was talking to you guys. Seriously, I would have died because of the boredom and lack of friends if it weren't for you, Nikki, and Livie. Love you. ♥

you should have named the baby Artemis! cool story anyway though.

Oh my God. Amazing. You are truly an amazing author. I enjoyed reading this from beginning to end. Especially the last chapter and the epilogue. But mostly the last chapter, I don't know why. It was perfect. Keep up the good work, I hope to read more stories by you! ;]

You want more reviews? Well... if you say so. :)

Why are you nervous? Your story is fantastic! I'm sure you'll win... or at least make it to the second place or something. Good luck (again!)

~Super Reader
aka
Lidia

A great ending to a great story. *sniffs* I can't believe it's over. Wow.

Aw, great ending Shannon! Can't wait for the next one! I'm so proud of Andrea =D

*sniffs* MY SHANNY-POO!! MY LITTLE BABY IS GROWING UP!!

*bursts into tears* AND THIS IS ENDING AND ITS SO SAD AND NYAHH!! *pounces on you* You better come back soon, ya hear!??!

Tahehehehe, THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS, YOU ARE SO SPECTACULARLY AWESOME AND NOW I'M JUST BAWLING LIKE AN INFANT BECUS ITS COME TO AN END AND ASJR;SEJREJESTGNSRJTG!!

Thank you for fighting with me, and enduring my annoying-ness and my ability to drive everyone insane but YOU, and for that...*wipes snot on your sleeve*

*beams* There ya go!

And I must say, I loved the last line, its my favorite and it just ended the story so well. *sobs hysterically*

ITS OVVAA!! AND OOH--OHH--OOWWAAHH!!

*scribbles in diary* "Dearest Diary, Shanny-poo posted the last chapter of Nevermore and my nose is all runny because of her. Pshaw, and she calls herself my friend! And my eyes are all red and puffy and are the size of beach balls or something cus HOLY CHEESE I LOOK LIKE A *FREAK*!!--"

*is screaming too much to continue*

I luff you Shannon! My padawan who has yet to learn the Sacred Language of the Squirrels! And also how to make cereal cus seriously last time you tried to make food you practically blew up the kitchen... O_O

Plus you must learn how to cook bcus when I kidnap you one day, guess whos gonna do the cooking? YOU! TAHEHEHEHEHE!!

And OH EM GEE I CANT BELIEVE ITS OVER RSKJROENFMWFN;PAIJFHENFED!!

SUPERKALAFRAJALISTICEXPEALADOSHUSS HEHEHEHEHEHEHE!!

OH and I also have to ask you! THEY MISTAKE ARTEMIS FOR A GREEK GOD!?!??! THAT IS SO EFFIN AWESOME!!

...He looks like one too ;) eh eh

*hugs you* You have the best ideas...Hmm, but you must make Foaly wear a ballerina tutu AT LEAST ONCE IN THIS ONE! Or else I shall disown you, bcus Foaly must wear a pink tutu OR THE WORLD IS OVER!

Plus, how cool is that? I personally think it will compliment his derrierre--he really has a nice one too...:D

Okii I'ma sign into MSN now, and I want chocolate. And salad. And milk. All together. Mm mm mm!

~BGE =D *squeezes you* I'm so terribly sad though...

YAY! Another story in the Trilogy!! Luff you for this, serioulsy.
Just one thing:
"You have the human race at steak"
It's stake, not steak. Hehehe, barbeque... Anywho, great job ShannyPoo! I get three aknowledgements (SP??) (because I'm a faithful reviewer!!)
I think I already HAVE you on authors alert...

LOVE THESE 2 STORIES!

AWW! THE EVIL PINK PENQUINS! OH NO PINK! RUN FOR YOU LIVES!! (runs dodges and rolls) I WILL SAVE YOU SHANNON! (forcefully shoves you to the ground) By the way I loved it!
You know it's CRAZY!