Great story.And vicky tricking jorgen by let timmy keep his fairys.If you do a sqeal I would enjoy it.Oh' if your still vote on a story to write?I have a idea for timmy is about to turn 21 and jorgen tells him he can't keep his fairy godparents anymore.Wanda is scary for timmy been alone with someone watch him.So jorgen tells them found a women to be with and make him choose four women he already know's.Most fans know who i'm talking about here are there sub.(V,T,V,T).

It seems like your rushing the story to me.

I also didn't like how you didn't bother to decribed the battle. It's boring to read 'they dueled' instead of how they fought.

I don't have much to say right now.

-A crappy reviewer

I think you used too much italics but I can't tell wether it was neccessary or not.

It seems like this is something that should've been revealed later in the story, like you gave it away too early. Maybie Hadyen should've been thinking about what happened, or slowly relises the evnts but not all at once.

Aw well, it does explain alot.

-A crappy reviewer

Man, I'm even more curious then ever. I have no idea what Hayden is talking about either. I'll be waiting for future updates.

P.S. I'm gussing Hayden means 'Handsome' in some language right?

-A crappy reviewer (it's my shtick! xD)

Good story. Nice plot.

Intresting start. I'd like to know more about this OC of yours.

I'll see how this progresses.

-A crappy reviewer