please upload new chapters soon

Hi, I know it's been a while, but I can't wait for you too update^^it's a good story^^

MOAR :D Update :D

Hm, a good fic in which Naruto isn't the 'nice guy' might be "The Unforgiving" It's by DisobedienceWriter. It's only a one-shot and Naruto isn't exactly a bad guy but he is certainly not a good guy. I think it's quite good. Cheers!

You know, it's nice to be able to read a femNaru fic where she isn't named Naruko. Niina is a welcome change.

sweet!

update!

pretty good, only problem is just how meek Niina is at this point, you keep describing progress but she never changes

“Well I should know… Niina is my God child after all…”
“G-godchild?!”
-how intimidating would that be, you are now dating the god daughter of one of the most dangerous men alive...how do you feel

Kabuto's sir name is Yakushi

plz write more

a fireball to knock open a door? why not just kick it?

good first chp though

you should continue this, make it all epic like, you made a cool bloodline and balanced out Niina's power with her shyness.

Cool story. I was not pleased with Sasuke but you made him not a jerk so I'm neutral...for now. Anyways I love it. XD

awesome cant wait for the next chapter