Oh, lovely. I can see these scenarios happening before their confrontation with the Undying, and I can feel the finality, the timorousness, that everyone is experiencing in their hearts.

This was well written, and very touching. Thank you for this.

This was a very moving piece, I am at a loss for words after reading it.

~Famke~

Awesome, an in character look into everybody.

Wow.

Just, wow.

That was amazing, stunning, beautiful. I loved it, this tatally goes on my favourites.

I just bumped into this fic. I read it and I must add it to my favourites. I think that says it all. I just love the way you descibe everyone's feelings, and I this short piece of story really fits in what trully happened in the game.

Beautifully written!

This is one of the best FFXII stories I've read. Thank you for sharing it.

Very beautifully written! Seems very realistic as if it is a missing part from the FFXII game. The pairings are realistic too. Good writing style :)

I liked this. Very emotional, but written well to convey all this emotion without overspill.

Good work.

This is all very lovely and beautifully written but-- given my wide-spread prjudices-- I'm most in love with the section on Penelo. (And my inner Larsa/Penelo shipper gives one giant squee to her missing him, hee.) Oh, you break my heart with how well you write her and her struggles. Great job here!

Intruiging. Beautiful writing, I could easily picture everything in my mind as I read through this literary work. I felt as though it was almost like a missing FMV from the movie, something that all of the characters were truly feeling, truly thinking that night before everything finally ended. You dug deep into sides of the characters we rarely saw, and how each one has changed since the fateful, dramatic meeting with all six of the warriors.

I loved the idea of the Strahl "singing" it's song to each character, making them wander through their thoughts, their pasts, and the people they have encountered and sided along. You did a great job, and I totally put this on my favorites.

The characterizations had me on pins and needles of awe! I love how the song interconnects with each thought and relation. :)

I think this is a really good one shot. Not too sappy, realistic and most important, the pairings I like too :P
I hope more people will review and say lots of nice things, I'm frankly too tired.