Myrtle at graduation! That was brilliant. Imaginative, poignant, and very, very funny. Olive won't be expecting that!

I wish I could have put my husband through the maze! He said he would do it lol This was a very different story than I've read so far I loved it wish it wasn't over:/

Fantastic, I was begging for more by the end

Well, I'm sure you get this quite often, but I'd just like to say that this is probably the best HGSS fic on the site. And not just because you're a master of kinky lemon writing.

I liked this fic first because of the premise, the whole Hermione back in time thing. Most fics make Hermione go to the past via some time turner or potions accident, then stay in the past and form a relationship with Severus. Yours makes her go to the past with the express purpose of stopping Severus from making a huge mistake. Quite unique.

Next, I like the fact that Lily got what she deserved in this fic. She isn't some fucking goddess of goodwill and perfect beauty. As far as I'm concerned, she's nothing but a controlling, self-righteous bitch who thought she could do no wrong. The fact that even in the end, she still thought she mattered, at all, was something I hated about the character, but liked about your story. Talk about self-absorbed.

Finally, the last aspect of this fic, the one part I absolutely loved, was that you kept this fic within the confines of a classy May/December. Too few HGSS fics follow the format, and thus the story runs away with the author, and the fic ends up like something off the mind of a hornball teenage girl. Not this fic. Your characters retained a degree of class and finesse, very well polished. I felt that this was the most proper and well-done May/December I've ever read on this site.

Ba-dum-tsss! Lolololz, sphinx is now my new favorite Harry Potter character.

Very hot, well worth the build up. Reading more immediately.

Wow, gotta be the campiest thing I've ever read. Sonnets? I guess, that's how they courted each other in 1998. Strange that I don't remember any of that happening in my time.

James really does think he can do no wrong, doesn't he? And Lily just keeps indulging the guy.

Man, I hate self-righteous people like that.

OH YEAH! Finally, those two get what they deserve! VENGEANCE... no, JUSTICE for Severus Snape!

Woww 66 chapters in two day. Im impress w myself. Lol. Its a wonderfyl story that got me addicted to. Keep up the good work

Wonderful story, I enjoyed it very much and loved the plot, well done! :-)

Immature Hermione irritates me in this story.. but I'm trying to understand since she is young and in this alternate timeline she didn't go through the hardships that tested her mettle and made her mature faster. It is a very interesting plot, not one that I've seen before with time-turner stories. But still, I just want to grab her by the shoulders and shake her, lol! I'm still enjoying the story very much. :-)

Hello! I remember having read the fic but I have among my favorites, I remember every story usually read, but if it did or not, I must say.

I LOVE YOUR STORY!

The reversal of the magic world by Hermione, Severus unbridled love and above all to poetic revenge a thousand times cursed (by me) Lily Evans. Uff, I'm glad to have those thoughts and something to tell you the truth, "Severus completely forget it"

Well say no more, but before I leave I apologize if you have trouble reading the fic, I use the translator.

No more thanks for such a beautiful story, without doubt one of the most romantic and tender that you have read.

Greetings and Courage!

Hahaha, this is ridiculous. There I was, reading along how Hermione convinces past Snape not to serve Voldemort and instead of any other plausible course of action, he's like "suck my cock". Don't you see how silly that is? I enjoy the occasional, well written, realistic lemon, but your story became laughable with that turn.

AWESOME! I LOVED THIS STORY! Thank you very much for writing it!

Selyne