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| Liars.and.Quitters 2007-07-24 ch 3,  | abuseplease continue! i would love to see you keep on going through the episodes. |
| cherrygurl1225 2007-07-23 ch 3, | abuseOh, no! Don't end it there! I wanna see that other game that will begin, lol. And how the battle is gonna turn out and everything. Will they give into feelings of love/lust for one another? Please write another Tru/Jack drabble series, so I can find out what happens! ;) |
| cherrygurl1225 2007-07-23 ch 2, | abuseAgain, I love what you did with the whole POV thing. It adds quite and interesting twist to each short piece and each character contributes something different that the other one cannot or does not, simply because it is only one person's POV at a time. Onto the next part! :) |
| CryssieM 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abusegreat piece! keep on going! |
| Liars.and.Quitters 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great beginning. I really like that it is in drabble style. You don't see a lot of that around. |
| PrincessTin 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseshort but intriguing |
| cherrygurl1225 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseAwesome drabble! I love how it's set before "Daddy's Girl" and yet there's already this sort of budding romantic tension just waiting to blossom. And I like how you described their different POVs. Tru feels like she's being stalked while Jack is kinda falling for a girl he doesn't even know yet. But there's this forbidden, unspoken attraction on both of their parts that you seemed to capture beautifully. So brava! I hope you will write more Tru/Jack drabble fics in the future cuz I love 'em! ;) |