It's really great so far. ^-^

would emily's kid be sev's brother or cousin or both? if she has one i mean. please update soon.

Loved the story in the beginning, but the last 5-10 chapters have been sloppy grammatically... Also, the whole time stream is totally destroyed with plot holes. How can the future versions even remember what was before? That doesn't make any sense with an updating plot line. Like I can understand a gradual upgrade year 1, year 2, and so forth and not all at once. BUT, they shouldn't be able toe remember a time where they can compare two versions of year 1. Then the Marauder names were kind of hard to use honestly. You have three 'p' names plus 'proud to present' it makes it seem a little lame. No offense. I like the concept but things kind of scattered.

Love it update again soon. ^.^

you know, this is probably one of the best stories i've read on seriously, its just brilliant and i love it!

hi love your story, but thought you should know that in the last paragraph-when molly finds her brothers are alive- you have one sentence that is just about unreadable. thats all i just like to say love your stories thanks

Hi,

the storry is cool! I like it very much.
The name of the children?! I think the child from Narzissa and Sev can named Draco and the child from Rem and Bella? How is Max or Rayen?

Pleas write soon more,

Anna

Ps. I am from Germany and therefore if you find errors in my English do not worry, I still practice!

u rock i already called someone god but u could be jesus

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

WOW! This was GREAT!! ^^ I laughed heartily at the look on Dum-Old-Dork's face! It was PRICELESS!! XD What will happen now? plz continue soon, kk? Ja ne! =^^=

NO thers no more to read i found this stroy a LONG time ago and lost it now that i found it and theres no more to read it sucks! LOVE the stroy

yes i think that Emily and Herry should get maired and that draco should keep his name ... remus and bellas kid... what to name it... if it's a girl i would say Gaiana (thats my goddaughters name she was born 3 mounts be for she should have been and was 1lb 2oz and was 13cm long she over a year now and almost walking!)

good story, I like it, sorry that I took so long to come back to it, bye

please make harry and emily be just friends coz if she fell pregnant or develope a relationship things will feel awkward

I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to read more.

I really like ur story hope u update soon
:)