Aw... so sweet

wow, this is very good. i really like it. i think all of them were pretty much in character :)

This is really wonderfully done and I adore the way you really delve into the minds of everyone as they watch Ichigo and Rukia utterly fail to keep their activities a secret. I especially love Karin's bit-- it's sounds exactly like her!

Well, I liked it. Odd way to present the story, but I think it works really well. The scene while they're doing maths homework was my favourite, in case you wanted to know, :P

You're a really wonderful author. I'll be watching! *Grins*.

I liked this history! Very lovely.

This is lovely, as are all your works. I love how the other characters, even when you are using them to communicate Ichigo and Rukia's relationship, retain their own voices regardless, and have their own stories to tell, and their own angst to combat. Sometimes, I feel them more than I do the IchiRuki subtext, although I know the story is geared towards that narrative. I find that marvelous, and well-accomplished, and I love the sensation of Ichigo and Rukia lurking everywhere, and hiding things, and thinking they are good at it. In a way, readers (or shippers of IchiRuki) are just like your characters in what we can see, no?

Thank you for sharing this - it has been a pleasure to read.

=)

This was really well done. I felt like you captured the characters really well, especially Isshin and Renji. Good job and keep up the good work. Great writing and description too!

GD

xox

Wow. You captured the charcter's perfectly. This was great!

I liked Kon's and Isshin's the best. Kon is such an under-appreciated character; it's a shame how he's almost always used just for comic relief... not many people remember that he was once unwilling to harm an ant because he believed all life was important.

This line made me lol: "Besides, it's not like he can get her pregnant, unless the 12th division has gotten very creative with its gigai since Isshin left."

What is the term for a secret known by many people? In Spanish it's 'secreto a voces'. It happens to be one of my favorite idioms of the language. Funny how Ichigo and Rukia must think that they're being perfectly secretive. Unfortunately, I don't believe that they have arrived to that stage of their relationship. Yet.

I love your characterizations of everybody. My favorite is Isshin. I feel kind of sad for him. And Renji, too. How he would do anything for her... amazing. But you deserve a prize for Kon's, you portrayed his little child-like mind perfectly. I imagine that must be hard...

Congratulations =^.^=

Very cute and very well written. The reactions from "the friends" are insanely accurate, but I feel like the Ichigo and Rukia that your portrayed were a lot more mature than they would be. Or at least Ichigo...he's still a kid.

But that's why fanfiction exists period. :) This was a wonderful read.

Great work! ^^

I really liked the various takes on Ichigo and Rukia's relationship, the many differences in the others' perception of the two as a couple and the similarities in everyone's point of view - because it's canon that everyone can see something's going on between those two, but we're never given actual, clear explanations to let us know what they THINK about it.

I also loved the wording, and the ICness that all of them displayed. ^_^ I personally think neither Ichigo nor Rukia has gotten around to the 'realization' part of their journey as a couple in the manga (just yet), but you made it work quite well in this fic, and I certainly enjoyed reading it!

Heh heh - everybody and nobody knows...
I think I liked Isshin's POV the best. The father who can't show his true colors - it must be so hard.
Another good one! I'm trapped at work right now - bouncing between reading and studying.

2 words.
freaking awesome.

This was a nice read.

I would like to give a more in-depth review, but I'm pretty tired and only have the use of one hand at the moment--so please forgive me.