Wow! That was a great story. Very angsty Chris-fic which I think we all love. Awesome work!

even with writers block in this one you still manage to write shinny!

like it - here is your shiny review!

Well after reading Heaven Help Us, I decided to go see what other Charmed Stories you were a author too. In doing so I found this one. I loved your extended parts. ‘Fantasies of the Flesh’ or 'My Three Witches'as it is called over here in the USA is my favorite eps.. So it was nice to see more to it. I always felt like there could have been more to the Eps.

Bless it Be

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

Lovely.

AW... That was very sweet- and very heartbreaking. There was no where near enough Chris in season 6!

Well, writer's block or not, this was really good. It was just perfect, the length, everything. Good one!

*hands you a shiny review*

i freakin LOVE the story! i just saw the 'oh my goddess' ep and i started looking 4 chris fics right away. this was brilliant! i loved it! it's very real!!
KEEP WRITING CHRIS FICS!

:D

I could KISS you right now! do you know HOW LONG it's been to see a good piece of Chris fanfiction?! I've been reading Chris fics since Chris started on the show, and I haven't found a realy good one in MONTHS! they're chock full of little sisters and visitors from the future, so on, so forth.

great job, good angst, we ned more stories like this!

lottsa love,
LLC

tugging on the heartstrings again... it's fics like this that make me just wanna give Chris a big hug and make it all better!
brilliant!

Beautiful, heartbreaking. This is exactly why I love Chris angst so much. Well done.

konnichi wa

*presents you with a review and many shint objects for your entertainment*

... Since you like shiny things and all ...

Anyway, for someone with Writer's Block, I'd say this is pretty good, LoL. I wrote a oneshot on the same exact subject WITHOUT Writer's Block, and mine wasn't as good. Admitedly, I pretty much hated what I ended up with, but that's me for ya, right?

Not the point. I just absolutely loved this. How he blew his perfect opportunity at the end, how he loved them so much, how you portrayed Chris. How he ended "with a slurred 'thanks'" before falling unconscious. I thought: "Lucky Chris. He deserves to be unconscious and not have to face them right now - with all that he just went through."

Kudos. *mmore shiny objects*

Zaijen
-Shan-

I lub Chris, good story!

I loved it, a lil short, but hey thats a one-shot for you! I haven't read a story that takes place with this episode, so it was something new for me. Nonetheless I enjoyed it. :]

wow another great story of you, thanks! love it :-)