ok. so i like this story but i think you made a mistake in one of the lines you say "erhaps Gandalf would take Leoglas to Rohan with Pippin.

however they were going to gondor, not rohan.

loved it ! your a really good writer I love how you take all my favorite moments from the book and movie and elabortate and add detail. I'm guessing your a legolas fan too!Keep up the good work!

Ooh that was really good. I hated how they didn't show a lot of detail with Aragorn and Legolas and the Palantir. This was a very good adaptation. Great work!

nice fic!

That was good. I like the conversation between Gandalf, Aragorn and Legolas. Using the elvish from the Silmarillion (Auta i lome, etc) was creative and it fits. I'm adding it to my favs =)

This is wonderful. I have also always wished there was more to that scene, so I'm glad you wrote this story.

I really like this story.

What a great story! When merry ran off to see Pipin leave and Aragon followed - where was Gimli?

Isn't Gandalf going to the white city? I think you wrote Rohan.

Still this is an otherworldly fic! Thanks for writing it.

This story was so intriguing and makes a wonderful gap-filler! I loved the dialogue between Gandalf, Aragorn, and Legolas. There are a couple of tiny typos and grammatical errors, but they certainly didn't detract from the effectiveness of this wonderfully written story. Well done; I really enjoyed it.

Ah, I loved this one. :)

~Calenlass