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| The-Black-Wrath-Alchemist 2007-08-18 ch 1,  | abuseAW! So cute! |
| Makayla 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseAW! CUTENES! I wanna know what happens next *pout* lol |
| Kakumei Bakudan 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abuseOh god, that was so hilarious and cute. XDD Wonderful, wonderful job!! The only thing I have to critique on is the fact that sometimes, this kind of thing is a lot more easy to read as a past-tense sort of thing, and it otherwise seems a bit like a screenplay, or unfinished or something. Other than that, wonderful job- I especially love Shuuhei's reactions. |
| MimoCat 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abuseLol I love the ending and the way Yumichika tells the story about Ikka and Kira. Good job! |