Beautiful.

i'm sorry but Offshoot? what kind of name is that?

creepy but good

Oh... My... GOSH.

Wow. That was AMAZING.

HOLY CRAP! are you going to continue...sigh...im totally up for dannyxsam thing...but theyre...all evil!

I'm both awed and horrified. Congratulations. You've managed to create a story that is both beautiful... and terrifying.

Make a second chappie? PLEASE?

I recall reading this story, I wanted to comment on it, bu only when I was restored to my rightful account. Now that I have it...

Your story was amazing! The way you described the scenery and the charcters emotions- ingenius! Your flow of words absolutely brilliant, and your vocabulary was quite fetching for readers like me who don't like "little words". I really, really liked this story...

Tell you what, you update and I review again. ;) Sound fair?

Wow, I've never seen anything quite like this. I liked it.

Neat little rewrite. It's a little hard to tell if you liked or hated "Urban Jungle". I'm leaning toward 'good, but could've been better, hence this story'.

Nice jab at the one-liners; I've long considered them cheesy, like they were trying too hard for laughs.

This is a splendid story.

Offshoot and Bloom... a little bit cheesy, but definately a great peice of work. The sense of foreboding skyrocketed when Sam finally turned Danny evil. And they got rid of Undergrowth!? Didn't see that coming! Anyway, good story.

Great story you have here. It was well written and thought out.I've got to say it was cool how Danny and Sam overthrew Undergrowth.The plot was really interesting and obviously done with creativity.You did a good job! ^_^

Wow. That was really, really fantastic.
= )

I loved your wording and phrasing, and the plot was awesome.

Great job!

This is pretty good :D The first individual I dea I came by in a long time :D

So beautiful and horrible at the same time...excellently done.