I like the way you've given all the characters a nice future...one thing I didn't expect was Director DiNozzo!

But the last section was touching, as were the paragraphs leading up to it. Nice writing, and good characters :)

A great story. Very good.

oh, come on! you could have issued a tissue-warning! lol! *blows nose*

that was so totally awesome. beautifully written, every sentence purposeful, each character brilliantly introduced, and all their emtions perfectly captured. i'm not sure i've read a better fic!

going on my faves.. :) xx

That was so beautiful that it made me cry.

Really beautiful.

That was absolutely beautiful and so moving. Great fic well done!

beautiful. but it was really sad.

Geez, you made me cry in the lab! Happy writing! (PS, plz continue your Ent series!)

Oh, I hate you! You made me cry!

What a beautiful story!

That was a truly beautiful story.

Hey,

I love this story. Was this meant to be a one-shot or is it to be continued? Great job. Can't wait to see mre NCIS tales soon.

Signed,

Kitty

Oh my... I have to say I found that story to be amazing. Really sad, but wonderful. I loved it how everyone had advanced and grown. And his death at the end, being reunited with Shannon and Kelly, so sweet, made me cry. Thank you

That was absolutely beautiful. You made me cry! And I don't generally cry over fanfiction...

wow nicely done. Though it seems like spoilers for your other works.

Lisa

i actually cried when i read this, it was so sad