Next one soon please, this just gets better and better!

I love this story! It's awesome! I hope you'll update it soon :D

Okay, I know you wrote this story two years ago, and I JUST finished the first chapter, but, and don't answer me if it's too personal, what school do you go to?? Because the team name of the school I go to is also the Central Cougars!! I'm not even kidding.

Well it's been a while but I'm back and trying to catch up on all the fics I have to write and read. Glad to see you are still going and looking forward to more.

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Cool story, I hope you update it soon. I like your style of writing, and the pace of the fic. It creates a nice atmosphere and it's not rushed or overdone like many other stories I've read. The characters have time to grow and evolve realistically. I really like that.

I'M SORRY IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO GET TO THIS VAMPY BUT I HAVE ISSUES WITH TIME-MANAGEMENT.

Um, I really liked this chapter. It had a lot of character development which is always good. I was especially happy when Ed stopped being twatty and let Envy come along, and talked to him. That was good. His idea about the beach is also good.

And I'm sorry about the short review but my brain is a little... dead. Sorry vampster!

Update soon! I enjoy this story. I've never seen Envy the spoiled brat before...

Oh, the start of something beautiful... Well, look you 13 chapters to do that.

Not that i'm complaining. *smile smile*

Wow, amazing chapter!

I really loved the star scene- they really do look pretty, don't they?

You wrote the description of the house really well- it felt like it was in Envy's POV, and it wasn't too long.

You're doing really well with this. Good luck with the next chapter!

~YukinoKara

I'm glad that Edward and Envy finally got to actually talk and get along and such, though I must say that their conversation was pretty morbid. But whatever gets the conversing I suppose. Yes. Oh and I sorta, kinda, feel bad for Envy again, with his whole “not like the movies” line, totally ‘aw’ moment, but the sad ‘aw’, apposed to the often used sweet one. Yeah.

thanks for updating good chapter

I love you, I love you, I love you.
Oh wow. The stars part, that was epic. It was just really cool. I love stars. They are so awesome.
Sure, he was a ** nymphomaniac, and an **, and annoying, and a jerk, and really spoiled... but everyone had their flaws! Love this part. Ed's falling, he just doesn't know it yet.
And Envy, was Envy possibly thinking that sex with Kimbley wasn't that bad? Tempted by Ed's hair is he?
Oh wow Winry conversation = love.
BEACH SCENE??!?!?!!?!? OH please, please please please please write a beach scene I love the beach.
Wow this was intense. I love it. I love this story. I have nothing to say really, except man this is awesome and you change names and publish this later. Seriously.

Aw... Ed and Envy bonding... So cute. I hope Envy eventually tells Ed about Kimbley... then at least Ed will know he's not a nympho. That's really unfair for Envy. Anyway. Awesome chapter. Next one sooner I hope?

You need to update more often :)

Aw, its nice that Ed and Envy are getting on now. :3 I want to go to a place like they went now, it sounds awesome.
Looking forward to the next chapter, the beach'll be fun!
And Five Minutes To Midnight is a brilliant song! ^-^