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| Inuyasha05 2008-06-10 ch 34, | abuseGood chapter! Update soon! -Inuyasha05 |
| Kitari Crystal 2008-06-10 ch 34, | abuseCoolness. It's getting really interesting now. I wonder what madness would follow. ^_^ Please update asap, okay? =D PS: By the way, I've noticed a few typos and grammatical errors in your story(not that my grammar is that good anyway. XD). Just a suggestion: Would you like to have me as beta for your story? I might also be able to give you a few ideas, if that's okay with you. Ganbatte~ ^_^ *~Crystal~* |
| liliana 2008-06-09 ch 34, anon. | abuseremember me? Well i just wanted to add that if you dont like that i control time you could change the power i dont care much i just want to make sure i'm a half demon and hav a power and am an ally to the inu group.Thanks. |
| Jikere 2008-06-09 ch 34, | abuseAwesome story!! Love how things are turning out and that you left people wondering what's gonna happen next after the 34th chapter! I was wondering,is there a chance I can be a character in this story too! The way you put people in is so cool! (If possible, can I be named Rina, with black hair and green eyes? You can make it however you want. Demon, human etc.) Thanks and update soon! :D |
| liliana 2008-06-09 ch 30, anon. | abusei love the how you inserted you and all those others(who's names i dont recall) into the story. I love the personality you throw into the story. I wish i could be as great an authour as you.(Did i spell that right? Idont thinks so.)On with the story. And I would like to have a character of my own. I would be called Lislain and would have brown curly hair, hazel eyes and my power is to control time. You may use this character as you like i wont have any input on what i want the character to do. Thanks.Lov ya. |
| Safaia Bara 2008-06-08 ch 34, | abuseTHANK YOU SO MUCH! KOUGA IS FINALLY MINE! (yes, this is Kougaismine4eva89, i decided to change my penname) yay! victory is ours! loved this chapter! it was full of humor, drama and my personal favorite...romance! i can't wait to find out what will happen next. hmm, InuYasha and Miroku could try to use rabid purple squirrels to bite through the net...i am VERY hyper right now. i hope i can help out more in the future! ttyl! |
| LunarStar Princess Krystal 2008-06-08 ch 34, | abuseAw man that was amazing. I loved it, especially the part where you got rid of Jaken (cough cough Toad Guts cough cough)and the song really was perfect I couldn't stop laughing. This has been so amazing I can't wait to read what happens next. Hmm what could happen? Will you have the group need to finish off Mirana since she got away? Or do you have something else in mind for the group now that Kagome has returned as a half demon? Oh and I want to say the parts at the beginning and the ends of the story where you have the characters interact with you is really a lot of fun and I can't wait to find out how you plan to make Inu Yasha and Miroku figure out how to get out of the net. Are you planning on exhausting them before they simply apologize, which just makes them fall out before they start to argue with you. Only to be threatened to be put back into the net and only then do the guys promise not to try to find out your secrets ever again. I hope that you like my ideas and again I want to say that I can't to read what you come up with next. Please Update Soon ^V^ |
| Inuyasha05 2008-06-07 ch 33, | abuseGood chapter! Update soon! -Inuyasha05 |
| Kitari Crystal 2008-05-03 ch 33, | abuseGreat chapter! =) I'm sorry that I didn't see this update earlier, hehe. But I'm really glad that you updated! ^_^ I hope Makkura doesn't try anything nasty. So, Jenna is on our side, is she? Anyways, please update faster! *~Crystal~* |
| Bells in the White Blizzard 2008-04-28 ch 33, | abuseSO SO SO SO AWESOME AND...UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
| maire 53 2008-04-27 ch 33, | abusethis is good cant wiat for the next chapter when will it be out? |
| inukag.lover19 2008-04-26 ch 33, | abusegood job! sorry bout the writers block and it was so funny @ times! ^-^ |
| jaimed1968 2008-04-26 ch 33, | abusei was wondering what ever happened to this story... Sorry that it took so long to review, I've been a little tied up with things. I loved the fight between Hinata and her sisters, you can tell that there is love in that scene... as they pummel each other to death. I still loved how the opening and closing author notes show Miroku and Inu still trapped in the net. I LMAO at their antics of trying to get out. Looking good, as well as looking forward to the next update. Thanks again for this interesting story. |
| Safaia Bara 2008-04-25 ch 33, | abusethis is getting good! oh, and if you need another person for your army...i would LOVE to help! i do have an idea, but you'll probably hate me for it... ttyl! |
| InuyashanKagomeForever 2008-04-25 ch 33, | abusePlease update soon I really love this story update soon! ^_^ |