 Cassandra30 2009-04-20 . chapter 1Remus was a good man! One of my favorite characters! |
 HungarianWitch22 2008-03-28 . chapter 1it's good.. could be a bit longer.. the Tonks scene was short too..
But it was well written! |
 zule bean 2008-01-13 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this...Have you ever thought about extending it to other "adult vignettes"? I've always been curious about that last conversation between Albus, Lupin, and Kingsley! |
 kelso-teh-freak 2007-07-12 . chapter 1Ohh, I loved it! It makes me so sad to see what life did to the Marauders! ; - ; i cried so hard at the end of Order of the Pheonix! |
 Arisa 2007-07-11 . chapter 1 Omg that was absolutely fantastic! Simple but beautiful. Golly I love your HP stuff! ~_^ |
 BeautifulDay13 2007-07-08 . chapter 1Oh this was perfect. Absolutely amazingly written. You got the angst and dry humour just right. Thankyou so much for writing this. Well done. |
 .rEckLeSsLy.cOnFIneD. 2007-07-08 . chapter 1Wow, I must say this is a different take on the remaining Marauders and I like it! The conversation between Remus and Sirius wa very unique and just..refreshing. THanks for writing, it was great! =) |
 prongsies.lady 2007-07-08 . chapter 1is this going to be a oneshot, or will there be more? cuz this is really good, shows a side of the remaining marauders that we havent seen before. if you are going to leave this as a oneshot, you should at least do a couple other deep conversations between them all, please? |
 xxanglophilexx 2007-07-08 . chapter 1I liked the chain smoker/stress smoker thing. Very cute. The conversation between Remus and Sirius was great, too, and I liked the image of Sirius and Remus talking, smoking and drinking firewhiskey. Nicely written. |
 something-like-love 2007-07-08 . chapter 1*sniffles* It was sad at first, but of course it got more cheerful with Tonks around. I particularly love Sirius saying that Remus "peer pressured" him into smoking. That had me cracking up for some reason... lol. =] Excellent! |
 Lee 2007-07-08 . chapter 1 I loved it and I dearly wished this would've been multi-chaptered. I like to see Remus/Sirius interaction that doesn't drown in drama. I also love Tonks being this clumsy, sweet girl who finds the two fascinating. The dialogue is super smooth. I stumbled over phrasing once or twice but the story is damn good. |
 Kylie1403 2007-07-08 . chapter 1i loved it! YAY TONKS! she is my fave! |
 Cuban Sombrero Gal 2007-07-08 . chapter 1Aww ... *cries because she can't write this well*
You got the Maruaders perfectly. Everything that they feel about Lily and James, about Harry, about their friendship, the future, you conveyed it all perfectly in such a short story. This has great description, you can just imagine them sitting around the table reminscing ...
*realises she ought to stop gushing*
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