Haha. Nice. Very nice. Zidane and his girls...dear me. The only thing that bothered me was the fact that the paragraphs weren't double-spaced, but that doesn't matter at all. So, essentially, wonderful job!
And wow. You wrote this seven years ago... Geez. I'm a bit late, aren't I? Well, nice job anyway.
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OMG I F**KING LOVED THIS SO BLOODY MUCH!! You characterised Zidane as the ladies man he is!! MAN I LOVED THIS FIC! Continue...?

lol! that was great! very like zidane's character ^_^

Nice, for a first fic. It shows just how much Zidane changes when he meets Garnet, and how little. he was always, essentially, looking for 'the one' but occationally got too much of a good thing. Its somehow cute...hehe... ^_^

I found this fic in passing (actually, I was browsing through reviews for THEINDWELLING...which reminds me, I need to review that, too), and decided to remark upon it, but alas... Anything I can say has already been said. ...Not that that's going to inhibit my comments...
Anyway, I like this story. It's short, witty, and completely in-character, which is great, because that was the point, right? You also win bias points because Zidane's my favorite FF character... haha. I thought it was particularly amusing when he admitted that he was conceited. Then again, I found the whole fic amusing. I should make a note to read more of your stories...

I decided to read this just for the heck of it. Know what? It's good. Really good. I totally believe this image of Zidane. I KNEW something else other than him being a flirt was going on!

i like this a LOT. and zidane DOES find that one girl eventually, that one incredible girl he would risk his life for and wants to be with forever. and she just HAPPENS to be WAY WAY WAY out of reach, and guarded by knights. teehee, DAGGER RULES!

Heheh poor Zidane baby

I can't believe I didn't review this. I guess I forgot. I totally loved this. I hope you write more fan fiction and maybe if you can, you can do one for the other characters.

lol. this is really good stuff. i enjoyed it very much. not really what i pictured Zidane's "inner" mind would be but still, i love it. keep on writing! I can't wait to see more. ^^

This made me SAD!ARGH!!!Zidane was such a sicko and then he's a sweetie and then....
Zidane:um.you're confusing me...
M.t.Z.f:I 4give u 4 all the bad stuff you've done,it's ALL because u where raised without a proper family!!*sobs*
Zidane:Finally,somebody on MY side (besides u,Sly Eagle)it's okay.M.t.Z.f....I'm fine,I'm married now!*grins that ADORABLE grin he has*
M.t.Z.f:*hugs Zidane*
=Zidane pats my head....gosh he is SO my favorite character!=

Not quite what I would imagine from Zidane's inner mind, but it was still hilarious. :-)

very good stuff. Aside from some deviations in FF paradigm, I thought it was a wonderful interpretation of Zidane's character.

What a humourous fic!! I love your sense of humor^_^ Monster fics? What kind? from which series?^_^ Anyway, ganbaateeee and hope to hear from u soon~

Yup! I loved this fic! Really I always wondered how Zidane was like to the girls back then before the game...