*screams* UPDATE!

I don't know when you last updated this, but I adore it. I also want more. :D

please continue, its getting really good;)

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! please?

SOONER THAN SOON! YES YES YES! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! IT'S BEEN SO LONG! :D PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN!

YES AHAHA! XD ! u finally updated! i can see how ur writing has improved in the past year too! update! again!

WRITE MORE CAUSE I KNOW WERE YOU LIVE AND I WILL GET YOU!please? T_T

u need to update this story! please!

why have you not touched this story in a year! TOUCH IT DAMMIT! AND MAKE JACK TOUCH BEN! LIKE WE ALL WE KNOW HE WANTS TO! its so cute and bloody! please please please right more!

You need to indent and start a new sentence with each new sentence. Right now it hurts my eyes to read it because its all jam-packed together.

I loved the first two chapters, though, so please fix it (or I could do it for you).

yay! i'm so glad you updated. I've always pictured them as a couple.

I hope Ben and Jack can somehow find a cure for vampirism, because I'm pretty sure if they defeat Camazots then all of the other vampires die with him. Or at least that's how it is in most vampire stories. :(

Yey, welcome back! :D

And the plot thickens!

Wow, wondering what was up with Emily, why she would have killed Ben. Can't wait to find out more about this!

Wahh Ben i hope you get home safe :o Maybe Jack needs to come back and help hehe.

Well I'll have to wait to the next chapter to see. Update soon! :D Can't wait _

OH! YAY! UPDATE! *dances*

Whoo!

haha its a good story...its so...emo and goth and stuffs...but its still pretty good. keep writing! PLEASE!

u need to update! i wanna know more! PLEASE!