Haha awww this was really just too cute and adorable.. ; 7 ; sdhaj great job!

Adorable. :3 Loved it.

Sooooo cute!

Awww that's cute. :)

THAT IS AWESOME. FUCK. THAT'S FUCKING AWESOME.

Remember how I feel about your Axel, like in Burning Bridges? How he's so MALE, such an absolute GUY, and as such, so terribly HOT? Yeah. I think that might just be your Axel in general, not specific to BB (although in BB he also has a strong badass edge that can ONLY be a good thing, hurr). 8D Fuck I love this Axel. I will have to keep reading for more hotness, MMHMM.

MAY I ALSO JUST ADD HOW I LOVE HOW IN A FEW LINES YOU PAINTED AN ABSOLUTELY TANTALIZING PICTURE OF THE NIGHT BEFORE AND HOW THAT HOTNESS AND TENSION JUST EXPLODED? THAT WAS FUCKING EPIC. FUCK. :D

THIS. WAS. BEAUTIFUL.

This is exactly how it would go down between these two; Axel staying because, well, why NOT stay? And Roxas thinking he would leave because it was a mistake and they were drunk : my heart did a flippy when he leaned forward and kissed Roxas. I loved this so much xD. It was so sweet but really realistic, so epic job

i'm going to have your babies. and i don't even like babies.

Amazing! xD I love it!

Nice, I love it!

Aw, that's adorable! poor Roxy doesn't know what to do with himself! great story, really well written.

Great story! I absolutely loved it!

aw.

cute.

your writing is so amazing.

like in every single story.

:)

Very interesting. I quite enjoyed it. The writing was top-notch, and the story flowed very nicely.

oh I loved it! hehe Roxas is way too stubborn I'm glad Axel is very persuasive ;)

Kyah, this was so amazing. X3 Absolutely cute and, and, some other words that evade my current train of thought. 8D;;